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Training course for TutorsWestern University announces a new course in the practice of professional tutoring. the course combines a discussion class with practical experience in either the Math Center or the Writing Center. in the discussion class, studen v.1

Training course for TutorsWestern University announces a new course in the practice of professional tutoring. the course combines a discussion class with practical experience in either the Math Center or the Writing Center. in the discussion class, studen v. 1
The employment practices have been changed radically since the last 25 to 30 years. Most of the employers want to be looped with their employees all the time in order to get rid of any uncertain situation. These working practices have their own positive aspects, however it has some significant negative points too. To begin with, technology is changing rapidly and it is setting lots of pressure on the multinational companies to small scale organizations to meet market demands. In order to meet demands or requirements the employers are trying to get maximum possible work from their staff. Nowadays, managers are used to call their junior staff at any time if any work related critical situation comes around. These kinds of practices have some advantages such as; critical situation can be tackled immediately, in certain condition problems needs to resolve on the spot to avoid any delays or financial damages to company, for example, construction industry. On the other hand, an employee is getting paid for their working hours only. The majority of an employee does not expect to work for free or they may not want to spend their leisure time in office even its urgency. For example, If an employee is enjoying their family time or function and if they were asked to do something office stuff, definitely they will not like to skip their personal life. This may result in employee’s low morale, they might feel to switch their current job or start to hate their company, they may not work as efficiently as they supposed to work. In conclusion, contacting the employees 24X7 has its own benefits as an organization. Nevertheless, it has significant downsides that might cost a-lot to the employer.
The employment practices have been
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changed
radically
since the last 25 to 30 years. Most of the employers want to
be looped
with their
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employees
all the
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time
in order to
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get
rid of any uncertain situation. These working practices have their
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own
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positive
aspects,
however
it has
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some
significant
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negative
points too.

To
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begin
with, technology is changing
rapidly
and it is setting lots of pressure on the multinational
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companies
to
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small
scale organizations to
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meet
market demands. In order to
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meet
demands or requirements the employers are trying to
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get
maximum possible
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work
from their staff. Nowadays, managers are
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used
to call their junior staff at any
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time
if any
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work
related critical situation
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comes
around. These kinds of practices have
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some
advantages such as; critical situation can
be tackled
immediately, in certain condition problems needs to resolve on the spot to avoid any delays or financial damages to
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company
,
for example
, construction industry.

On the other hand
, an
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employee
is getting paid for their working hours
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only
. The majority of an
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employee
does not
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expect
to
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work
for
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free or
they may not want to spend their leisure
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time
in office even its urgency.
For example
, If an
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employee
is enjoying their family
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time
or function and if they
were asked
to do something office stuff, definitely they will not like to skip their personal life. This may result in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee’s
low morale, they might feel to switch their
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current
job or
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start
to hate their
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company
, they may not
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work
as
efficiently
as they supposed to work.

In conclusion
, contacting the
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employees
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24X7
has its
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own
benefits as an organization.
Nevertheless
, it has significant downsides that might cost a-lot to the employer.
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IELTS essay Training course for TutorsWestern University announces a new course in the practice of professional tutoring. the course combines a discussion class with practical experience in either the Math Center or the Writing Center. in the discussion class, studen v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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