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TPO 34 - Question 3 Program to Provide Free Tutoring The university has announced that starting with the fall semester, free tutoring will be available to all new students for their entire first year. The academic dean. James Maxwell, commented. "The v.1

TPO 34 - Question 3 Program to Provide Free Tutoring The university has announced that starting with the fall semester, free tutoring will be available to all new students for their entire first year. The academic dean. James Maxwell, commented. "The v. 1
Some organisations think that the staff should have a proper dress code, while others believe the quality of work is the priority rather than the physical appearance. This essay will discuss both views and an opinion. Some companies require the employees to wear on uniforms. Reason is, for them to know which department the workers are assigned. It is pleasant to see, the employees are in proper uniform and it gives a good impression to another individual. For example, in the hospital setting, nurses are required to be in white uniform, hair is properly tied up for females, clean hair cut for males and white shoes. In the government offices, the employees are not required to wear uniforms, but the workers need to be in a polo shirt and close shoes. In other institutions, workers are not required to be in proper attire, as long as the staff gives a high quality performance during working hours with comfortable clothes. However, there are some negative outcomes in terms of dealing with other people. It is unpleasant to see working in an institution with shorts, sleeveless or wearing slippers rather than shoes. The employee will gain less respect compared to those workers who dress smartly. In conclusion, wear proper uniform is important in any companies, although the value of quality of work is also important, nevertheless; it is pleasant to see employees are well dressed during working hours. Employees will not only received good impression from other people, but will gain respect and trust from other people.
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Some
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organisations
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think
that the staff should have a
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proper
dress code, while others believe the quality of work is the priority
rather
than the physical appearance. This essay will discuss both views and an opinion.

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Some
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companies
require the
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employees
to wear on
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uniforms
. Reason is, for them to know which department the
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workers
are assigned
. It is pleasant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
, the
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employees
are in
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proper
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uniform
and it gives a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
impression to another individual.
For example
, in the hospital setting, nurses
are required
to be in white
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uniform
, hair is
properly
tied up for females, clean hair
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cut
for males and white shoes. In the
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government
offices, the
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employees
are not required to wear
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uniforms
,
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but
the
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workers
need to be in a polo shirt and close shoes.

In
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other
institutions,
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workers
are not required to be in
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proper
attire, as long as the staff gives a high quality performance during working hours with comfortable clothes.
However
, there are
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some
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negative
outcomes in terms of dealing with
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other
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people
. It is unpleasant to
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see
working in an institution with shorts, sleeveless or wearing slippers
rather
than shoes. The
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employee
will gain less respect compared to those
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workers
who dress
smartly
.

In conclusion
, wear
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proper
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uniform
is
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important
in any
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companies
, although the value of quality of work is
also
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important
,
nevertheless
; it is pleasant to
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see
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employees
are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well dressed
during working hours.
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Employees
will not
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only
The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: "receive"
received
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good
impression from
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other
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people
,
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but
will gain respect and trust from
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other
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people
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay TPO 34 - Question 3 Program to Provide Free Tutoring The university has announced that starting with the fall semester, free tutoring will be available to all new students for their entire first year. The academic dean. James Maxwell, commented. "The v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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