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Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities v.2

Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities v. 2
Nowadays, congestion in all countries, especially in big cities, is on the increase and this problem should be tackled by the governments. Some measures should be taken to provide a descent public transportation and making some traffic rules to control the traffic in big cities. The most important reason that people prefer to use their own car is the lack of good service in public transportation. If there is a comfortable and cheap transportation in major cities, people will prefer to use it instead of driving. In addition, the prices should be reasonable to encourage people for using it. As an example, Finland, which is famous for the traffic-free streets, could reduce the traffic up to 60% by improving the public transportation system in 1998. On the other hand, governments should think up new ideas in changing the civic infrastructures. For instance, by adding congestion charges for going to the special parts of the cities such as city center or by introducing some parts as a car-free zones like the historical parts of the cities which are always crowded because of the tourists. Or by dividing the cars based on their plate number and the days of the week, even and odd, in order to enter to some specific parts of the city. To sums up, the traffic problem should be tackled by the governments since it could cause another problems in the future such as air pollution. To overcome this issue, some more effort is needed.
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especially
in
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, is on the increase and this problem should
be tackled
by the
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governments
.
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Some
measures should
be taken
to provide a descent public
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transportation
and making
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some
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traffic
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rules
to control the
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traffic
in
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big
cities.

The most
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important
reason that
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people
prefer to
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use
their
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own
car is the lack of
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good
service in public
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transportation
. If there is a comfortable and
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cheap
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transportation
in major
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cities
,
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people
will prefer to
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use
it
instead
of driving.
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people
for using it. As an example, Finland, which is
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for the traffic-free streets, could
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reduce
the
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traffic
up to 60% by improving the public
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transportation
system in 1998.

On the other hand
,
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governments
should
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think
up new
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ideas
in changing the civic infrastructures.
For instance
, by adding congestion charges for going to the special
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parts
of the
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cities
such as city center or by introducing
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some
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parts
as a car-free zones like the historical
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parts
of the
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cities
which are always crowded
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because
of the tourists. Or by dividing the cars based on their plate number and the days of the week, even and odd, in order to enter to
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some
specific
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parts
of the city.

To sums up, the
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traffic
problem should
be tackled
by the
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governments
since it could cause another problems in the future such as air pollution. To overcome this issue,
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some
more effort
is needed
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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