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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give r v.5

Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give r v. 5
Some people believe that traditions belong to the past and it is useless to keep them for the social development and human should focus on the innovation in the future. Personally I completely disagree with this idea for several important parts of traditions. Traditions play a vital role in human life. Firstly, most of scientific inventions resulted from discoveries in the past. It means that current modern technologies might not work without developments of the past. For example, there is computer age recently, smartphones and laptops are used commonly, they become important gadgets in several aspects of human' s life such as work, education and recreation. However, they would not be invented and developed without electricity which was discovered centuries ago. Ancestors also created plenty of useful tools to serve people' s life that was still popular currently such as hammer and fishing net. Besides, traditions and customs make great contribution to human culture. To give a clear example, Egyptian had invented alphabet and writing language plays an essential part not only in Egyptian but also the rest nations on the world. Furthermore, people having thorough insight into history of the world and each nation will be able to gain deep understanding about relevant economic events, cultural festivals happening in each period. For example, Vietnamese could link details of historical and economic events to know how war affected their economy as well as their development in education and culture. In conclusion, there is a variety of vital roles of traditions. Though life is onward and upwards, people could not put aside old developments in the past but always treasuring them.
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. It means that
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current
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developments
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past
.
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used
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, they become
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in Egyptian
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the rest nations on the world.
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,
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having thorough insight into history of the world and each nation will be able to gain deep understanding about relevant economic
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events
, cultural festivals happening in each period.
For example
, Vietnamese could link
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details
of historical and economic
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events
to know how war
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affected
their economy
as well
as their
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development
in education and culture.

In conclusion
, there is a variety of vital roles of traditions. Though
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life
is onward and upwards,
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people
could not put aside
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old
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developments
in the
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always treasuring them.
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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give r v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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