People really like watching movies either at the cinemas or on their laptop. However, some people believe that watching movies is just a waste of time. In this essay, I shall give my personal opinion to oppose this statement.
To begin with, people need to refresh their mind after they do the tiring work. By watching movies, they can relax a bit and get lost in the movie plot which can help them in recharging their energy. It also allows people to strengthen their relationship with friends and family. For example, so many couples and family go to the cinema at the weekend as a form of spending quality time with their beloved ones. I believe that sharing similar interest and doing activities together with family and friends can bring joy and happiness among society. Another example is teenagers may have different interest and knowledge regarding so many things with their parents. Thus, watching the same movie together can solve this generation gap issue and allow teenagers to share common movie-related topics with their parents.
Second, watching movies is also the most effective way to learn new languages. For example, there are so many Indonesian teenagers who can speak fluently since they watch Korean dramas. I am certain that this method is more effective than in-class learning. It makes people learn new languages unconsciously.
In conclusion, watching movies has several benefits, namely it can refresh our mind, make us closer to our friends and families, and allow us to learn new language effectively. I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks, so this activity cannot be considered as a waste of time.
People
really
like watching
movies
either at the cinemas or on their laptop.
However
,
some
people
believe that watching
movies
is
just
a waste of time. In this essay, I shall give my personal opinion to oppose this statement.
To
begin
with,
people
need to refresh their mind after they do the tiring work. By watching
movies
, they can relax a bit and
get
lost in the
movie
plot which can
help
them in recharging their energy. It
also
allows
people
to strengthen their relationship with friends and
family
.
For example
,
so
many
couples and
family
go to the cinema at the weekend as a form of spending quality time with their beloved ones. I believe that sharing similar interest and doing activities together with
family
and friends can bring joy and happiness among society. Another example is
teenagers
may have
different
interest and knowledge regarding
so
many
things with their parents.
Thus
, watching the same
movie
together can solve this generation gap issue and
allow
teenagers
to share common movie-related topics with their parents.
Second, watching
movies
is
also
the most effective way to learn new languages.
For example
, there are
so
many
Indonesian
teenagers
who can speak
fluently
since they
watch
Korean dramas. I am certain that this method is more effective than in-
class
learning. It
makes
people
learn new languages
unconsciously
.
In conclusion
, watching
movies
has several benefits,
namely
it can refresh our mind,
make
us closer to our friends and
families
, and
allow
us to learn new language
effectively
. I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks,
so
this activity cannot
be considered
as a waste of time.
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