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Advertisement brings many negative effect on people and the society. What are these problem? How to solve this problems? v.1

Advertisement brings many negative effect on people and the society. What are these problem? How to solve this problems? v. 1
According to some scientists everyone will be speaking the same language in the future. If this prediction does come true, in my opinion, it will have both positive and negative ramifications. No doubt, a universal language will benefit both people and businesses in numerous ways. It will make communication easier. As a result, businesses can market their products all over the world. People can also travel to any part of the world without having to worry about getting lost because of the language barrier. This, in turn, will benefit industries such as travel and hospitality. Needless to say, a universal language will benefit almost all economies around the world. It may even foster respect and understanding among people of different ethnicities. On the flip side, the prospect of having just one language for all does not bode well for the preservation of cultural identities. Culture is intrinsically linked to language. So if people adopt a global language and stop using their mother tongue it will not take long for their culture to die. The death of local languages will also make the folklore and literature in that language unavailable to future generations. Another possible consequence will be the loss of employment for people working as translators and interpreters. In a world where everyone speaks the same language, they will be rendered jobless. In conclusion, a universal language can be beneficial for businesses and people because it facilitates hassle free communication. However, it may lead to the demise of cultures and diversity.
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scientists everyone will be speaking the same
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in the future. If this prediction does
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come
true, in my opinion, it will have both
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positive
and
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negative
ramifications.

No doubt, a universal
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language
will benefit both
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people
and businesses in numerous ways. It will
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make
communication easier.
As a result
, businesses can market their products all over the
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world
.
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People
can
also
travel to any part of the
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world
without having to worry about getting lost
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because
of the
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language
barrier. This, in turn, will benefit industries such as travel and hospitality. Needless to say, a universal
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language
will benefit almost all economies around the
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world
. It may even foster respect and understanding among
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people
of
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different
ethnicities.

On the flip side, the prospect of having
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just
one
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language
for all does not bode well for the preservation of cultural identities. Culture is
intrinsically
linked to
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language
.
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if
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people
adopt a global
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language
and
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stop
using their mother tongue it will not take long for their culture to
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die
. The death of local
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languages
will
also
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make
the folklore and literature in that
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language
unavailable to future generations. Another possible consequence will be the loss of employment for
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people
working as translators and interpreters. In a
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world
where everyone speaks the same
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language
, they will
be rendered
jobless.

In conclusion
, a universal
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language
can be beneficial for businesses and
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people
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because
it facilitates hassle free communication.
However
, it may lead to the demise of cultures and diversity.
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IELTS essay Advertisement brings many negative effect on people and the society. What are these problem? How to solve this problems? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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