Nowadays, there has been a rising concern about the security when people are staying at home or going out. In this essay, I will outline some reasons causing people worry about their safety day by day as well as the ways to solve these problems.
One of the main reasons is that there are more and more cases of burglary or vandalism. It happens more often, especially when people spend their holidays and leave their house unmanned. After coming back, they find out that they have lost their valuable belongings at home or their properties have been damaged. Beside that, due to the significant increase of private vehicles recently, the roads are more condensed with cars or motorbikes leading to accidents occurring more frequently than ever before. Many accidents that lead to serious injuries or fatalities of travellers have been observed.
However, there are several solutions to help people deal with these problems. Firstly, authorities should strengthen the security system by deploying more officers to the habitat areas as well as installing more CCTVs for surveillance footage. Levelling education and reducing unemployment rate also assist to reduce crimes remarkably. Secondly, public transportation needs to develop more to meet the daily demand so that people freely switch to use buses or trains which are the safest means of transportation. The less private vehicles on the street, the fewer accidents happen.
In conclusion, even though many problems make people not feel safe in their own residence or in public, there are a number of possible solutions to counteract these problems. 
Nowadays, there has been a rising concern about the security when  
people
 are staying at home or going out. In this essay, I will outline  
some
 reasons causing  
people
 worry about their safety day by day  
as well
 as the ways to solve these problems.
One of the main reasons is that there are more and more cases of burglary or vandalism. It happens more  
often
,  
especially
 when  
people
 spend their holidays and  
leave
 their  
house
 unmanned. After coming back, they find out that they have lost their valuable belongings at home or their properties have  
been damaged
. Beside that, due to the significant increase of private vehicles recently, the roads are more condensed with cars or motorbikes leading to accidents occurring more  
frequently
 than ever  
before
.  
Many
 accidents that lead to serious injuries or fatalities of  
travellers
 have  
been observed
. 
However
, there are several solutions to  
help
  people
 deal with these problems.  
Firstly
, authorities should strengthen the security system by deploying more officers to the habitat areas  
as well
 as installing more  
CCTVs
 for surveillance footage. Levelling education and reducing unemployment rate  
also
 assist to  
reduce
 crimes  
remarkably
.  
Secondly
, public transportation needs to develop more to  
meet
 the daily demand  
so
 that  
people
  freely
 switch to  
use
 buses or trains which are the safest means of transportation. The less private vehicles on the street, the fewer accidents happen. 
In conclusion
,  
even though
  many
 problems  
make
  people
 not feel safe in their  
own
 residence or in public, there are a number of possible solutions to counteract these problems. 
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