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TPO 50 Question 2 Some people like having a wide variety of friends and acquaintances they can spend time with Others like to spend most of their free time with the same small group of close friends Which do you prefer Explain why v.1

TPO 50 Question 2 Some people like having a wide variety of friends and acquaintances they can spend time with Others like to spend most of their free time with the same small group of close friends Which do you prefer Explain why v. 1
Petroleum, gas and the fuel used automobiles should be unauthorized by altering them with rechargeable electric cars. Personally, I do agree with this opinion which has a good impact in order to recreate more eco-friendly transportation. On the one point, the governmental executive and legislative branches should raise the taxes on selling fossil fuel materials. For instance, most developing countries, they are always looking for opinions that provide a progression to develop the national budget. To raise the taxes on petroleum, national gas, coal, and oil will not only improve the economy of government and help to avoid using fuel-based cars. For this importantly balanced idea, most of the developing countries take it high on their agenda to make fuel-based cars less used subconsciously. From another point of view, the automobiles powered by electricity have no danger both for the human body's health and ecosystem of the environment. As every country is responsible to provide good conditions to the public, they have to prohibit the fossil fuels burning automobiles and make modification by increasing the number of electric vehicles for both public transportation and personal usage. On the other hand, burning more gas products pollute the environment by spreading oil and petroleum fume into the atmosphere. Last year, Luxembourg was most popularly discussed in the media because it became the first country that banned cars that get its power from fossil fuel materials and replaced with electricity using transportations. By this method, the government will ensure the measurement of providing good livelihood and a clean environment for its population. To summarize, I completely agree with the idea which has an important contribution to keep saving money and the planet.
Petroleum, gas and the
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fuel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
automobiles should
be unauthorized
by altering them with rechargeable electric cars.
Personally
, I do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this opinion which has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
impact in order to recreate more eco-friendly transportation.

On the one point, the governmental executive and legislative branches should raise the taxes on selling fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
materials.
For instance
, most developing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
, they are always looking for opinions that provide a progression to develop the national budget. To raise the taxes on petroleum, national gas, coal, and oil will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the economy of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to avoid using fuel-based cars.

For this
importantly
balanced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
, most of the developing
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countries
take it high on their agenda to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
fuel-based cars less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
subconsciously
.

From another point of view, the automobiles powered by electricity have no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
both for the human body's health and ecosystem of the environment. As every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
is responsible to provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
conditions to the public, they
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have to
prohibit the fossil
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fuels
burning automobiles and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
modification by increasing the number of electric vehicles for both public transportation and personal usage.
On the other hand
, burning more gas products pollute the environment by spreading oil and petroleum fume into the atmosphere. Last year, Luxembourg was most
popularly
discussed in the media
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it became the
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
that banned cars that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
its power from fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
materials and replaced with electricity using transportations. By this method, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will ensure the measurement of providing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
livelihood and a clean environment for its population.

To summarize
, I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
which has an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
contribution to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
saving money and the planet.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay TPO 50 Question 2 Some people like having a wide variety of friends and acquaintances they can spend time with Others like to spend most of their free time with the same small group of close friends Which do you prefer Explain why v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
279 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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