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Starting this year, the university dining hall will be transformed into the campus dining club for one weekat the end of each semester. During the last week of semester, the dining hall will feature special meals prepared by the university's culinary arts v.1

Starting this year, the university dining hall will be transformed into the campus dining club for one weekat the end of each semester. During the last week of semester, the dining hall will feature special meals prepared by the university's culinary arts v. 1
People are always debating about marriages and the important criteria in a marriage. Some think it is a smart decision to marry for wealth as future in unpredictable, Whereas, others think it should be purely based on love between the individuals. In this essay we will discuss both the view and explain why I think love should be the most important criteria in a marriage. Some think marrying for money would result in a stable and a stress free life. Since money is readily available, uncertain situations or demands could be faced with ease and confidence. In general, unexpected medical expenses or situations could be dealt with the available money. For example, saved money in banks could be used to handle a sudden and unfortunate accident or illness. As a result, some feel it is wiser to marry for money to handle the unpredictable world without considering other things in a relationship. On the other hand, as they saying goes "love is eternal" and so the marriage as a result of love is also eternal. In this case, the core bonding between the individual is based on an internal feeling love and not on anything external. In general, Any hardship would be faced together, as the love between individual drives the relationship and leads to both dedicating the life to the other partner. For example, individual’s had gone to great extend to express the love for their spouse. One such example, is the beautiful structure and a world wonder in India called Taj Mahal. Hence, marrying someone out of true love will be everlasting. In my opinion, As no one could predict the future, Love should be the basis for marriage, Since it eternally drives the individual to be compassionate and caring for the other partner. In future one's love should be the basic eligibility criteria for marriage.
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IELTS essay Starting this year, the university dining hall will be transformed into the campus dining club for one weekat the end of each semester. During the last week of semester, the dining hall will feature special meals prepared by the university's culinary arts v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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