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TPO 33-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much moreeffectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. Use specific reasons and examples t v.2

TPO 33- When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much moreeffectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. Use specific reasons and examples t v. 2
Without any shadow of doubts, teachers prepare different tasks for students to make them ready for their future life. There are plenty thinking that group projects have more positive effective on students, while there are some who believe that students should work alone. I am of the opinion that students can learn many aspects by working together than working alone. To support my stance, the following explanation will further elaborate on my perspective. One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion is that by working together, students understand that the productivity of a whole team might enhance consequently. Since they are working together, they gradually realize that they can share their works and this can save time to reach a sooner result. Moreover, not only can they help each other but also motivate their group members to stick with the team. In essence, the immediate correction of the faults are one of the noticeable results, and also team members can stimulate the weak ones to work harder. For example, imagine that a teacher assigns a math problem for students and then categorize students to some groups. Obviously, they can get better results than working alone because they share their ideas towards the problem and after trying each method, the most accurate one will be soon transparent for a whole group. Another reason which deserves to say some words here is that teachers can create an ambiance for students to get socialized in their school life by making group projects. Students are always shy and embarrassed in the begging of the school, and they do not know how to interact with other. To ease this process, teachers should encourage them to make some groups in each of their subjects to get to know each other better. Take my experience for instance, when I was in high school, because of being a new student in my school, I could not communicate with the people around. However, thanks to my teacher' s method, I got used to talking and presenting my ideas to my friend after being a group member of a class project. On the other hand, by working alone, students can focus better on their assignments. As youngsters have the tendency to play with each other when they meet, they cannot concentrate intensely on their subjects. Imagine a teacher assigns a project for students, and they work together as a group, but one of them brings his Ipad to the class. Instead of working and solving their assignments, they will play games which can decrease the performance of a whole team. In sum, by contemplating all the reasons mentioned above, I am pretty convinced that there are many solid reasons to foster the idea that group works are more productive than working alone. Although students may be inclined in some cases to play games, group actions can not only instruct them to be more productive but also help them to find more friends and get socialized in their school.
Without any shadow of doubts,
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teachers
prepare
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different
tasks for
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students
to
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make
them ready for their future life. There are
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plenty
thinking that
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group
projects have more
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positive
effective on
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students
, while there are
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some
who believe that
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students
should
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work
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alone
. I am of the opinion that
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students
can learn
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many
aspects by
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working
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together
than
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working
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alone
. To support my stance, the following explanation will
further
elaborate on my perspective.

One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion is that by
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working
together,
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students
understand that the productivity of a whole team might enhance
consequently
. Since they are
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working
together, they
gradually
realize that they can share their works and this can save time to reach a sooner result.
Moreover
, not
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only
can they
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help
each
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other
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but
also
motivate their
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group
members to stick with the team. In essence, the immediate correction of the faults are one of the noticeable results, and
also
team members can stimulate the weak ones to
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work
harder.
For example
, imagine that a
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teacher
assigns a math problem for
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students
and then categorize
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students
to
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some
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groups
.
Obviously
, they can
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get
better results than
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working
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alone
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because
they share their
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ideas
towards the problem and after trying each method, the most accurate one will be
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soon
transparent for a whole group.

Another reason which deserves to say
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some
words here is that
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teachers
can create an ambiance for
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students
to
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get
socialized in their
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school
life by making
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group
projects.
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Students
are always shy and embarrassed in the begging of the
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school
, and they do not know how to interact with
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other
. To
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ease
this process,
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teachers
should encourage them to
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make
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some
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groups
in each of their subjects to
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get
to know each
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other
better. Take my experience
for instance
, when I was in high
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school
,
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because
of being a new
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student
in my
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school
, I could not communicate with the
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people
around.
However
, thanks to my
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teacher&
#039; s method, I
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got
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used
to talking and presenting my
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ideas
to my friend after being a
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group
member of a
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class
project.

On the
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other
hand, by
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working
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alone
,
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students
can focus better on their assignments. As youngsters have the tendency to play with each
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other
when they
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meet
, they cannot concentrate
intensely
on their subjects. Imagine a
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teacher
assigns a project for
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students
, and they
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work
together as a
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group
,
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but
one of them brings his
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Ipad
to the
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class
.
Instead
of
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working
and solving their assignments, they will play games which can decrease the performance of a whole team.

In sum, by contemplating all the reasons mentioned above, I am pretty convinced that there are
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many
solid reasons to foster the
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idea
that
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group
works are more productive than
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working
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alone
. Although
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students
may
be inclined
in
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some
cases to play games,
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group
actions can not
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only
instruct them to be more productive
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but
also
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help them to find
more friends and
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get
socialized in their
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school
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
54Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 33- When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much moreeffectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. Use specific reasons and examples t v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
499 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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