Technology nowadays are quickly being developed drastically, thus, many advancement in computers are used by majority of people. Indeed, this improvement in science had made our life' s easier and convenient. In my opinion, technology made our young generation less creative than in the older years, therefore, creativity and uniqueness in one' s minds are rarely being applied in everyday lives. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, gadgets and computers are used almost everyday by teenagers, in which, if they need certain things to be accomplished like project in arts, they just will search in the worldwide web to know to exactly how to made things such as painting, in other words, they will not use their brain to think outside the box in creating their own masterpiece. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Before, I love to create my own dish at home, experimenting with different ingredients available at our fridge, this way I was able to practice being creative and practicing different styles in cooking, due to lack of resources when I was little I was forced to do it on my own. But now, I only relied on the internet for the procedure and ingredients that I need to cook, thus, the easy accessibility of the internet tends people becoming lazy and not imaginative in widening one' s knowledge.
Secondly, technology has bad effects on our health especially on children, due, to their bodies are not fully developed their eyes could suffer, they are prone to have astigmatism and to wear graded glasses. In addition, these technology are addicting to them, such as, online games, computer games, therefore, their overall health would be compromised because they may lack the needed sleep they need for growth and development in their brain, also, some of the teenagers are having poor diet due to they are hooked in the game, they play 10 hours straight without anything to eat or drink. For instance, In the clinic I work for, a 10 year old kid was confined in the hospital due to ulcer and strained eyes, they neglect their health to feed this addiction in games. Accordingly, I believe there are no benefits to the health of our young generation to be exposed in the advancement in technology, risks in health are more abundant thus, it should not be supported at all.
In conclusion, I believe that parents should not expose their off springs in technology. This is because harmful effects are expected to be seen in children who are inclined in use of computers and technology such as being less creative and bad effects on health.
Technology
nowadays are
quickly
being developed
drastically
,
thus
,
many advancement
in computers are
used
by majority of
people
.
Indeed
, this improvement in science had made our
life&
#039; s easier and convenient. In my opinion,
technology
made our young generation less creative than in the older years,
therefore
, creativity and uniqueness in
one&
#039; s minds are rarely
being applied
in everyday
lives
. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all
, gadgets and computers are
used
almost everyday by
teenagers
, in which, if they need certain things to
be accomplished
like project in arts, they
just
will search in the worldwide web to know to exactly how to made things such as painting,
in other words
, they will not
use
their brain to
think
outside the box in creating their
own
masterpiece. My
own
experience is a compelling example of this.
Before
, I
love
to create my
own
dish at home, experimenting with
different
ingredients available at our fridge, this way I was able to practice being creative and practicing
different
styles in cooking,
due
to lack of resources when I was
little
I
was forced
to do it on my
own
.
But
now
, I
only
relied on the internet for the procedure and ingredients that I need to cook,
thus
, the easy accessibility of the internet tends
people
becoming lazy and not imaginative in widening
one&
#039; s knowledge.
Secondly
,
technology
has
bad
effects on our
health
especially
on children,
due
, to their bodies are not
fully
developed their eyes could suffer, they are prone to have astigmatism and to wear graded glasses.
In addition
, these
technology
are addicting to them, such as, online
games
, computer
games
,
therefore
, their
overall
health
would
be compromised
because
they may lack the needed sleep they need for growth and development in their brain,
also
,
some of the
teenagers
are having poor diet
due
to they
are hooked
in the game, they play 10 hours straight without anything to eat or drink.
For instance
, In the clinic I work for, a 10 year
old
kid
was confined
in the hospital
due
to ulcer and strained eyes, they neglect their
health
to feed this addiction in
games
.
Accordingly
, I believe there are no benefits to the
health
of our young generation to
be exposed
in the advancement in
technology
,
risks
in
health
are more abundant
thus
, it should not
be supported
at all.
In conclusion
, I believe that parents should not expose their off springs in
technology
. This is
because
harmful effects are
expected
to be
seen
in children who
are inclined
in
use
of computers and
technology
such as being less creative and
bad
effects on
health
.