Tourism is a valuable business for many countries and can bring them many benefits, but it can also cause damage to local communities. discuss the arguments on both sides of the issue. what is your opinion on the matter? Give reasons for your answer and in v.2
Tourism is a valuable business for many countries and can bring them many benefits, but it can also cause damage to local communities. discuss the arguments on both sides of the issue. what is your opinion on the matter? 2
tourism is a valuable business for many countries, and can bring them many benefits, but also cause damage to local communities. I believed that tourism should have two majors factor involved.
Nowadays, the world has many countries development, so the poor countries and other countries are not yet developed and need to help. that is one of the reasons why they have tourism there. Firstly, tourism comes to the country and made a lot of jobs for local people, the amount of professional for the country. Secondly, the local government has funds from taxes of travel agency. And additionally, the information of the local can be PR for other places and to widely people know about the local. When someone visited here, they always want to go to beautiful places. For this reason, the landscape is better looked after. Next, tourism help improves the overall levels of economic in the local, make the opportunities for cooperation in other areas.
In contrast, the local has developed tourism entails many negative impacts on all aspects. For example one of the problems are about the environment, social, traffic, . . . As a result, social evils appear more and more, the natural landscape is destroyed and pollution to some issue about the traffic jam. Because the number of people using transport means increase.
In conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides of this debate. tourism creative many occasion developed for the local, while travel organizes damage to social. In my opinion, I feel that tourism should grow more and the local government must take management measures to limit negative impacts on communities.
tourism
is a valuable business for
many
countries
, and can bring them
many
benefits,
but
also
cause damage to
local
communities. I believed that
tourism
should have two majors factor involved.
Nowadays, the world has
many
countries
development,
so
the poor
countries
and other
countries
are not
yet
developed and need to
help
.
that
is one of the reasons why they have
tourism
there.
Firstly
,
tourism
comes
to the
country
and made
a lot of
jobs for
local
people
, the amount of professional for the
country
.
Secondly
, the
local
government
has funds from taxes of travel agency. And
additionally
, the information of the
local
can be PR for other places and to
widely
people
know about the
local
. When someone visited here, they always want to go to
beautiful
places.
For this reason
, the landscape is better looked after.
Next
,
tourism
help
improves
the
overall
levels of economic in the
local
,
make
the opportunities for cooperation in other areas.
In contrast
, the
local
has developed
tourism
entails
many
negative
impacts on all aspects.
For example
one of the problems are about the environment, social, traffic
, .
.
.
As a result
, social evils appear more and more, the natural landscape is
destroyed
and pollution to
some
issue about the traffic jam.
Because
the number of
people
using transport means increase.
In conclusion
, there are strong arguments on both sides of this debate.
tourism
creative
many occasion
developed for the
local
, while travel organizes damage to social. In my opinion, I feel that
tourism
should grow more and the
local
government
must
take management measures to limit
negative
impacts on communities.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes