Topic: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extend do you agree or disagree v.2
Topic: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. v. 2
The people ask why we should support capital sanction. Some of them say that we should care about criminal person’s humanitarian situation, including his family and his kids. Others, proponents of this punish, believe this vision, stopping execute for the killer, will result in an unsafe world and an increase the violated rate.
Firstly, it truly said that this punishments stop misbehaviour, so all countries use them to prevent any misconduct coming through their citizens. Firstly, this enforces people to respect the rule. If the crimes have stronger legitimately punishments, would lead people to considerably avoid. For example, it says needlessly that the average of the murder lawsuit is less than the fraudulent. That can be explained by saying that the punishment for the murder is stronger than the fraudulent. As a result, compared with the weak punishment, the strong sanction makes the world safer.
On the other hand, not only do the weak punishments lead people to be tolerated with the rule, it also increases the rate of crime. It is said loudly that some of the murders, spending their life in prison, kill another civilian in prison. That increase the rate of crime. These prisoners may try to hurt their victim’s families and any person, testified against them. If these people escape from their prison, they will do with their victim’s families.
In conclusion, theoretically, we should mercy the murder people because of humanitarian. Presumably, these killers should have thought before they had made their mistake. It seems clear that testification on neglection of murder sanction will lead to encourage these killer and imminent attack toward the civil society. For this reason, I support to kill killer people, but it should insure their legitimate rights.
The
people
ask why we should support capital sanction.
Some
of them say that we should care about criminal person’s humanitarian situation, including his family and his kids. Others, proponents of this punish, believe this vision, stopping execute for the killer, will result in an unsafe world and an increase the violated rate.
Firstly
, it
truly
said that this
punishments
stop
misbehaviour
,
so
all countries
use
them to
prevent
any misconduct coming through their citizens.
Firstly
, this enforces
people
to respect the
rule
. If the crimes have stronger
legitimately
punishments
, would lead
people
to
considerably
avoid.
For example
, it says
needlessly
that the average of the
murder
lawsuit is less than the fraudulent. That can be
explained
by saying that the
punishment
for the
murder
is stronger than the fraudulent.
As a result
, compared with the weak
punishment
, the strong sanction
makes
the world safer.
On the other hand
, not
only
do the weak
punishments
lead
people
to
be tolerated
with the
rule
, it
also
increases the rate of crime. It
is said
loudly
that
some of the
murders
, spending their life in prison, kill another civilian in prison. That increase the rate of crime. These prisoners may try to hurt their victim’s families and any person, testified against them. If these
people
escape from their prison, they will do with their victim’s families.
In conclusion
,
theoretically
, we
should mercy
the
murder
people
because
of humanitarian. Presumably, these killers should have
thought
before
they had made their mistake. It seems
clear
that
testification
on
neglection
of
murder
sanction will lead to encourage
these killer
and imminent attack toward the civil society.
For this reason
, I support to kill killer
people
,
but
it should insure their legitimate rights.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes