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Topic: Some university professors let their students choose their research topic themselves. Some do not. Which one do you think is better. Why? @ v.1

Topic: Some university professors let their students choose their research topic themselves. Some do not. Which one do you think is better. Why? @ v. 1
The combination of interest and effort leads to the luminous results. Universities always have been places for intellectual nourishment, and they have been established to promote science and individuals’ innovative faculty. According to some psychologists, individuals make their best efforts in the fields they have a predisposition to. But the other point here is whether students’ predilection for the research field is profitable for science world or not. An ineluctable query which always has been the topic of contention and brought about heated debates is whether professors should let their students choose their research topic themselves or not. From my vantage point, students should work on their research interest. In what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective. First of all, it is significant to be mentioned that universities are the last step of students to initiate their occupational life, and it is a very cardinal period of time to procure and establish their self-esteem and autonomy. It is very momentous value for universities to nurture students who are innovative and mentally open. If professors let the students choose their research field according to their interest, it would benefit students and society in manifold ways. For instance, the student will attend his research very diligently and he would experience mental flow which is a satisfaction in doing an interesting activity during which you do are not cognizant of time passage. The result of such hard and ginger work would be very successful and will lead to great scientific results. This student will have a very proper self-esteem because he could flower his potential abilities and he will be a profitable person to his society too. Another reason which deserves some attention is that professors would benefit in this way too. For instance, if professors accede to their student' s research field, they will be familiar with new fields they have not tried. So in this way, they could extend more their sweeping knowledge and maybe find something new in the terra incognita. Furthermore, the success of their students would benefit them in another way too. If their students are successful, their academic rate will rise and they will win their students’ acclaim which is the most precious thing for a teacher. This success and approbation will give the teachers the sense of equanimity which is the best experience in life. From my viewpoint, it is the best achievement for teacher and it would be a repose from arduous work they have done to that point. Reflecting upon all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that it is the best way to let students choose their research field. Students who can accommodate their interest and their efforts will get the best results in their life. They will develop a very integrated personality, especially in occupational settings and this progress will disseminate to other aspects of their life. Their acquired self-esteem and self-government will scatter to their social relations too. So with some meditation, it is obvious that success in the university and life is very dependent on the harmony which students can experience in the university. It can be a very great field of research for scientists to promote students’ future welfare. They can assay students’ sense of freedom in choosing research field and the effects on future development and success in every aspect of students’ life.
The combination of
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interest
and effort leads to the luminous
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results
.
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Universities
always have been places for intellectual nourishment, and they have
been established
to promote science and individuals’ innovative faculty. According to
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some
psychologists, individuals
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make
their
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best
efforts in the
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fields
they have a predisposition to.
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But
the other point here is whether
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students’
predilection for the
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research
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field
is profitable for science world or not. An ineluctable query which always has been the topic of contention and brought about heated debates is whether
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professors
should
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let
their
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students
choose their
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research
topic themselves or not. From my vantage point,
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students
should work on their
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research
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interest
. In what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective.

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First of all
, it is significant to
be mentioned
that
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universities
are the last step of
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students
to initiate their occupational
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life
, and it is a
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very
cardinal period of time to procure and establish their self-esteem and autonomy. It is
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very
momentous value for
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universities
to nurture
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students
who are innovative and mentally open. If
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professors
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let
the
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students
choose their
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research
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field
according to their
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interest
, it would benefit
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students
and society in manifold ways.
For instance
, the
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student
will attend his
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research
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very
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diligently and
he would experience mental flow which is a satisfaction in doing an interesting activity during which you do are not cognizant of time passage. The
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result
of such
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hard
and ginger work would be
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very
successful and will lead to great scientific
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results
. This
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student
will have a
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very
proper self-esteem
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because
he could flower his potential
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abilities and
he will be a profitable person to his society too.

Another reason which deserves
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some
attention is that
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professors
would benefit in this way too.
For instance
, if
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professors
accede to their
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student&
#039; s
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research
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field
, they will be familiar with new
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fields
they have not tried.
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So
in this way, they could extend more their sweeping knowledge and maybe find something new in the terra incognita.
Furthermore
, the
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success
of their
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students
would benefit them in another way too. If their
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students
are successful, their academic rate will
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
rise and
they will win their
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students’
acclaim which is the most precious thing for a teacher. This
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success
and approbation will give the teachers the sense of equanimity which is the
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best
experience in
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life
. From my viewpoint, it is the
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best
achievement for teacher and it would be a repose from arduous work they have done to that point.

Reflecting upon all the aforementioned reasons, one
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soon
realizes that it is the
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best
way to
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let
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students
choose their
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research
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field
.
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Students
who can accommodate their
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interest
and their efforts will
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get
the
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best
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results
in their
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life
. They will develop a
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very
integrated personality,
especially
in occupational settings and this progress will disseminate to other aspects of their
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life
. Their acquired self-esteem and self-
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government
will scatter to their social relations too.
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So
with
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some
meditation, it is obvious that
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success
in the
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university
and
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life
is
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very
dependent on the harmony which
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students
can experience in the
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university
. It can be a
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very
great
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field
of
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research
for scientists to promote
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students’
future welfare. They can assay
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students’
sense of freedom in choosing
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research
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field
and the effects on future development and
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success
in every aspect of
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students’
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life
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
68Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Topic: Some university professors let their students choose their research topic themselves. Some do not. Which one do you think is better. Why? @ v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
556 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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