Young people who commit serious crimes such as a rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2
Young people who commit serious crimes such as a rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. v. 2
Juvenile delinquency is becoming an increase concerns. To keep the crime rate within limits, some people reckon that the punishment for those young criminals should not be differentiated from the adults. As far as I am concerned, the practice is can be done on the condition that they commit crimes more than once.
The reason of advocate of the harsh punishment is that it is usually considered as an effective way of deterring the adolescents from reoffending. Besides, it is extremely unfair for the victims if the criminals who committed the major crime escaped from the sentence just simply because they are still young. Without the harsh punishment, moreover, the teenager would not realize the serious after effect of their heinous crimes and leave the victims and their families suffering.
However, juveniles do not have the same physical and mental condition as the adults, therefore, the punishment would not have much effect on them. For some of them, meanwhile, they do not have adequate endurance so that the penalty may destroy their whole life and future. Additionally, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gear to become the leader of the certain area. Compared with adult criminals, the young ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes.
In conclusion, I believe that naïve and young as criminals are, heinous acts should be punished regardless of the age, for the sake the long-term social benefit, rigorous education and chances should be offered to young offenders. However, if only they commit crimes again, there is no excuse for them to escape from the equivalent penalty as adults.
Juvenile delinquency is becoming an increase concerns. To
keep
the
crime
rate within limits,
some
people
reckon that the
punishment
for those
young
criminals
should not
be differentiated
from the
adults
. As far as I
am concerned
, the practice is can
be done
on the condition that they commit
crimes
more than once.
The reason of advocate of the harsh
punishment
is that it is
usually
considered as an effective way of deterring the adolescents from
reoffending
.
Besides
, it is
extremely
unfair for the victims if the
criminals
who committed the major
crime
escaped from the sentence
just
simply
because
they are
still
young
. Without the harsh
punishment
,
moreover
, the
teenager
would not realize the serious after effect of their heinous
crimes
and
leave
the victims and their families suffering.
However
, juveniles do not have the same physical and mental condition as the
adults
,
therefore
, the
punishment
would not have much effect on them. For
some
of them, meanwhile, they do not have adequate endurance
so
that the penalty may
destroy
their whole life and future.
Additionally
, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gear to become the leader of the certain area. Compared with adult
criminals
, the
young
ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes.
In conclusion
, I believe that naïve and
young
as
criminals
are, heinous acts should
be punished
regardless of the age, for the sake the long-term social benefit, rigorous education and chances should
be offered
to
young
offenders.
However
, if
only
they commit
crimes
again, there is no excuse for them to escape from the equivalent penalty as
adults
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes