There are a large number of money spent on maintaining old buildings. Some people think that it is pointless to look after them and we should replace them with modern buildings. I believe that it should depend on the value of buildings.
It is clear that buildings which are too old to lose functions should be knocked down and build new ones. Because of peoples’ growing demands, some old buildings are abandoned. Besides, the structures of the abandoned buildings are usually not firm enough, not only the cost spent on repairing them is a waste but also the buildings endanger peoples’ lives. They should be knocked down to provide more space to other new buildings. New facilities and technologies, like lifts and air condition, can be used in modern architectures, which means the buildings can meet peoples growing demands.
The buildings that have historic and artistic values should be protected. Some historic events happened in there, which make the buildings playing a crucial role in history. While buildings with artistic values can be used to improve peoples’ aesthetic appreciation. Both of them were properly be built by famous persons or local dwellers’ efforts. We should spend financial looking after and repairing them, make sure that they will be stable enough as significant landmarks. For example, the Leaning Tower of Pisa is no doubt to be a gorgeous architecture; what’s more, Galileo’s Free-Falling-Experiment happened in the tower. It is undeniable that we do our best to protect it.
In conclusion, whether an old building should be knocked down or be maintained is depended on the its value in terms of art and history.
There are
a large number of
money spent on maintaining
old
buildings
.
Some
people
think
that it is pointless to look after
them and
we should replace them with modern
buildings
. I believe that it should depend on the
value
of buildings.
It is
clear
that
buildings
which are too
old
to lose functions should
be knocked
down and build new ones.
Because
of
peoples’
growing demands,
some
old
buildings
are abandoned
.
Besides
, the structures of the abandoned
buildings
are
usually
not firm
enough
, not
only
the cost spent on repairing them is a waste
but
also
the
buildings
endanger
peoples’
lives
. They should
be knocked
down to provide more space to other new
buildings
. New facilities and technologies, like lifts and air condition, can be
used
in modern architectures, which means the
buildings
can
meet
peoples
growing demands.
The
buildings
that have historic and artistic values should
be protected
.
Some
historic
events
happened in there, which
make
the
buildings
playing a crucial role in history.
While
buildings
with artistic values can be
used
to
improve
peoples’
aesthetic appreciation. Both of them were
properly
be built
by
famous
persons or local dwellers’ efforts. We should spend financial looking after and repairing them,
make
sure that they will be stable
enough
as significant landmarks.
For example
, the Leaning Tower of Pisa is no doubt to be a gorgeous architecture; what’s more, Galileo’s Free-Falling-Experiment happened in the tower. It is undeniable that we do our best to protect it.
In conclusion
, whether an
old
building
should
be knocked
down or
be maintained
is depended
on the its
value
in terms of art and history.
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