Some people insist that money should be spent to construct new buildings instead of maintaining obsolete ones. However, I object the idea that people would be better off if they abolish old buildings and build new ones. The next reasons will be sufficient to support my object for the idea.
First of all, there are many memorable buildings closely correlated with people’s lives that money cannot compensate the value of them. Generally, these buildings have many meanings to people in various aspects. For example, in my village, there is a house aged for 100 years. Most people who have grown up in my village have unforgettable memories with the building. The house was main playground for me and my friends, when we are children. If the house should be destroyed because of financial issue, it will be not only the disappearance of one old house but the eradication of our valuable memories.
Secondly, some buildings are playing a key role in educating people about historical fact. If we just remove these buildings owing to the cost of sustaining the buildings, it is tantamount to an erroneous belief that anything is not profitable any more deserves to be abandoned regardless of their intangible values. Thus, people need to recognize those buildings’ hidden value and think about how to fully utilize these precious assets people inherited from their ancestors. If not so, people will end up with facing the circumstance that there is nothing left to leave our next generation to come.
In conclusion, as we have seen above, those old buildings are still meaningful to people’ lives as well as educational purpose. Therefore, people should be encouraged to preserve our historical and meaningful building.
Some
people
insist that money should
be spent
to construct new
buildings
instead
of maintaining obsolete ones.
However
, I object the
idea
that
people
would be better off if they abolish
old
buildings
and build new ones. The
next
reasons will be sufficient to support my object for the
idea
.
First of all
, there are
many
memorable
buildings
closely
correlated with
people’s
lives
that money cannot compensate the value of them.
Generally
, these
buildings
have
many
meanings to
people
in various aspects.
For example
, in my village, there is a
house
aged for 100 years. Most
people
who have grown up in my village have unforgettable memories with the
building
. The
house
was main playground for me and my friends, when we are children. If the
house
should be
destroyed
because
of financial issue, it will be not
only
the disappearance of one
old
house
but
the eradication of our valuable memories.
Secondly
,
some
buildings
are playing a key role in educating
people
about historical fact. If we
just
remove these
buildings
owing to the cost of sustaining the
buildings
, it is tantamount to an erroneous belief that anything is not profitable
any more
deserves to
be abandoned
regardless of their intangible values.
Thus
,
people
need to recognize those
buildings’
hidden value and
think
about how to
fully
utilize these precious assets
people
inherited from their ancestors. If not
so
,
people
will
end
up with facing the circumstance that there is nothing
left
to
leave
our
next
generation to
come
.
In conclusion
, as we have
seen
above, those
old
buildings
are
still
meaningful to
people’
lives
as well
as educational purpose.
Therefore
,
people
should
be encouraged
to preserve our historical and meaningful
building
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes