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TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 3 - The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. State her opinion about and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. - Preparation Time: 30 SecondsResponse Time: 60 Seconds v.1

TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 3 - The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. State her opinion about and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. - Preparation Time: 30 SecondsResponse Time: 60 Seconds v. 1
Vehicles were introduced to the world for ease of life. Nowadays, almost more than half the population of the world owns the personalized cars. Alternative forms of transportation are diminishing. No international laws to control motor owner are implemented. So the question is, should there be limitations or restrictions on car ownerships? Yes, there should be a limited purpose of personalized vehicles and public transportation must be encouraged. In addition, there are many forms of commuting, Bicycling is one of the cheapest, affordable for of travelling. It is healthy exercise too, that keeps the body momentum high. Use of buses and trains is decreasing in the society. However, these transits are way more affordable than cars. But people are seeking for goods that provide them a comfort zone and that saves time. Use of public transit control pollution and traffic on the roads. Fuel consumption by cars can be controlled. Taking a bus, or other transit options are much safer than driving a car as they are maintained more regularly than a personalized car. Public transportation is linked to healthier lifestyles, as people get three more times of physical activity that of who use cars. Moreover, many families have more than one or two cars. In most families, every individual owns their personalized vehicle. To illustrate, let say there are four members in a family-mother, father, son and daughter. In this family, everyone has their own luxurious motor vehicle. But they can adjust with least of two cars that help them save money. But four of them want to save time and be in a comfort zone and show their luxury to the world. For deduction of the amount of vehicles what must be done? So the answer is there should be international laws, that should limit the number of vehicles owned by a family. To summarize, the use of cars is not always inappropriate. It was introduced for human sake and help them make them comfortable commuting long distance. But increasing numbers of cars for own comfort or to put themselves in the air is affecting the nature in terms of pollution and discomfort people who do not own vehicles.
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Vehicles
were introduced
to the world for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
of life. Nowadays, almost more than half the population of the world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owns
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personalized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. Alternative forms of transportation are diminishing. No international laws to control motor owner
are implemented
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the question is, should there be limitations or restrictions on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
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ownerships
? Yes, there should be a limited purpose of
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personalized
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vehicles
and public transportation
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must
be encouraged
.

In addition
, there are
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many
forms of commuting, Bicycling is one of the cheapest, affordable for of travelling. It is healthy exercise too, that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keeps
the body momentum high.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Use
of buses and trains is decreasing in the society.
However
, these transits are way more affordable than
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cars
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are seeking for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
that provide them a comfort zone and that saves time.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Use
of public transit control pollution and traffic on the roads. Fuel consumption by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
can
be controlled
. Taking a bus, or other transit options are much safer than driving a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
as they
are maintained
more
regularly
than a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personalized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. Public transportation
is linked
to healthier lifestyles, as
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
three more times of physical activity that of who
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use
cars.

Moreover
,
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many
families have more than one or two
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cars
. In most families, every individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owns
their
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personalized
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicle
. To illustrate,
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let
say there are four members in a family-mother, father, son and daughter. In this family, everyone has their
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own
luxurious motor
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vehicle
.
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But
they can adjust with least of two
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cars
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them save money.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
four of them want to save time and be in a comfort zone and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their luxury to the world. For deduction of the amount of
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vehicles
what
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must
be done
?
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So
the answer is there should be international laws, that should limit the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
by a family.

To summarize
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
is not always inappropriate. It
was introduced
for human sake and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them comfortable commuting long distance.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
increasing numbers of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
own
comfort or to put themselves in the air is affecting the nature in terms of pollution and discomfort
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 3 - The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. State her opinion about and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. - Preparation Time: 30 SecondsResponse Time: 60 Seconds v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
361 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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