We are living in the most competitive world where there is no place for an ordinary person, so everyone has to put extra efforts in order to be the best and sustain in the society. As a result, mostly youngsters have to pass through the lots of stress.
Firstly, nowadays, teenagers are exposed to more products than earlier generation as an output of living in modern society. They get attracted through films, advertisements and offers for consumer products like expensive shoes, clothes, gadgets, and vehicles. In order to achieve luxuries teenager take the extra pressure which increases stress level and also affects their health. In earlier times, people took burden because they do not have any option for survival.
Secondly, pressure in the schools is now stronger than before because if they get a better education and if they have a good degree certificate, then only they can able to get good jobs which is an origin of competition. As competition increases parental pressure, homework and examination burden is also increased.
On the other hand, it is certainly true that modern society produces stress which does not necessarily because the root cause of the extreme stress is the race to achieve extra comfort and luxury. In earlier times, hunger and physical discomfort caused the stress but it was necessary and they do not have any other ways. That is one of the reasons; most of the people had laboured work or hard work.
To sum up, consumerisms, academic and competitive world are the main causes of teenager’s stressful life, but they can get rid out of it if they come out show off and start living life simple and quality life.
We are living in the most competitive world where there is no place for an ordinary person,
so
everyone
has to
put extra efforts in order to be the best and sustain in the society.
As a result
,
mostly
youngsters
have to
pass through the lots of
stress
.
Firstly
, nowadays,
teenagers
are exposed
to more products than earlier generation as an output of living in modern society. They
get
attracted through films, advertisements and offers for consumer products like expensive shoes, clothes, gadgets, and vehicles. In order to achieve luxuries
teenager
take the extra pressure which increases
stress
level and
also
affects their health. In earlier times,
people
took burden
because
they do not have any option for survival.
Secondly
, pressure in the schools is
now
stronger than
before
because
if they
get
a better education and if they have a
good
degree certificate, then
only
they
can able to
get
good
jobs which is an origin of competition. As competition increases parental pressure, homework and examination burden is
also
increased.
On the other hand
, it is
certainly
true that modern society produces
stress
which does not
necessarily
because
the root cause of the extreme
stress
is the race to achieve extra comfort and luxury. In earlier times, hunger and physical discomfort caused the
stress
but
it was
necessary and
they do not have any other ways.
That is
one of the reasons; most of the
people
had
laboured
work or
hard
work.
To sum up,
consumerisms
, academic and competitive world are the main causes of
teenager
’s stressful life,
but
they can
get
rid out of it if they
come
out
show
off and
start
living life simple and quality life.
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