Nowadays society is tempted to buy advertising products. They are not the real needs of people where they are sold. I firmly agree with this statement up to some extent. This essay will argue why consumer products are not advertised according to the basic needs of the public.
First and foremost, people prioritize high-level products to get. They often apply famous companies, like McDonald's to have cheap and delicious food. These kinds of companies like to use advertisements to attract many people's attention to their goods. They are advertised with good qualities and prices on TV and social media. That is turn has hazardous effects on society because they don't cover people's important meals and can result in health problems. According to the statistics in the US, the majority of people are likely to buy products, such as fast food, because of their popularity. It can happen with the help of advertisements of them in public and might have a shadow on the real needs of consumers.
It is considered that human beings are catching up with society. It means that we always want to buy new or modern things, for example, a mobile phone, to show ourselves. For instance, I have noticed my neighbor is keeping the trace of the others, that's the way she is more likely to spend more money on unnecessary items than the most important needs. As a result,
she must follow recent advertisements to get more modern and fresh goods than her neighbors. It shows how advertisements can affect our lives. Furthermore, they may create an image among people that if some people buy it, you also have to get. I reckon that advertisements have a huge adverse impact on us.
In conclusion, a lot of people prefer advertising goods instead of their real needs, I do believe that it is a consequent of advertisements in many places which affect their thoughts. Similarly, it is an undeniable fact that their existence can cause several problems in human relationships.
Nowadays society
is tempted
to
buy
advertising
products
. They are not the real
needs
of
people
where they
are sold
. I
firmly
agree
with this statement up to
some
extent. This essay will argue why consumer
products
are not advertised according to the basic
needs
of the public.
First
and foremost,
people
prioritize high-level
products
to
get
. They
often
apply
famous
companies
, like McDonald's to have
cheap
and delicious food. These kinds of
companies
like to
use
advertisements
to attract
many
people
's attention to their
goods
. They
are advertised
with
good
qualities and prices on TV and social media.
That is
turn has hazardous effects on society
because
they don't cover
people
's
important
meals and can result in health problems. According to the statistics in the US, the majority of
people
are likely to
buy
products
, such as
fast
food,
because
of their popularity. It can happen with the
help
of
advertisements
of them in public and might have a shadow on the real
needs
of consumers.
It
is considered
that human beings are catching up with society.
It
means that we always want to
buy
new or modern things,
for example
, a mobile phone, to
show
ourselves.
For instance
, I have noticed my neighbor is keeping the trace of the others, that's the way she is more likely to spend more money on unnecessary items than the most
important
needs
.
As a result
,
she
must
follow recent
advertisements
to
get
more modern and fresh
goods
than her neighbors. It
shows
how
advertisements
can affect our
lives
.
Furthermore
, they may create an image among
people
that if
some
people
buy
it, you
also
have to
get
. I reckon that
advertisements
have a huge adverse impact on us.
In conclusion
,
a lot of
people
prefer advertising
goods
instead
of their real
needs
, I do believe that it is a consequent of
advertisements
in
many
places which affect their thoughts.
Similarly
, it is an undeniable fact that their existence can cause several problems in human relationships.
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