It is true that people are judged based on their social dignity and personal wealth nowadays, and traditional values such as integrity and honesty are being forgotten. To a certain extent, I would agree with the fact that people are valued based on their wealth and status these days, but I also believe that old fashioned values still play an important part in our society
It is believed that we are living in the pop culture and the materialistic era these days, as the public judge each individual based on his/her social status and wealth. It can be seen from how celebrities become famous nowadays. Many celebrities have been popular because of their physical appearance and such Kim Kardashian. Her reality television program never shows any world class acting quality, but only shows about her luxurious mansions and fancy cars. And then there are other celebrities who are well known due to his/her social dignity as the son or the daughter of a wealthy family. One of the examples would be Paris Hilton. Indeed, she has many bad attitudes, she is still popular because she inherits the assets of her parents.
Although traditional values such as respect others, being responsible, honesty and integrity seem to be forgotten nowadays, but they still play an important part in many communities. In common cases, employers are still assessing their potential employees based their hard working attitude, positive behaviour and their integrity. And then business people are still looking for business partners who are reliable, can be trusted, and dependable. Therefore, it is important for adults to educate their children about these positive values because they still play an essential part in the societies.
It is true that
people
are judged
based on their social dignity and personal wealth nowadays, and traditional values such as integrity and honesty are
being forgotten
. To a certain extent, I would
agree with the fact that
people
are valued
based on their wealth and status these days,
but
I
also
believe that
old fashioned
values
still
play an
important
part in our
society
It
is believed
that we are living in the pop culture and the materialistic era these days, as the public judge each individual based on his/her social status and wealth. It can be
seen
from how celebrities become
famous
nowadays.
Many
celebrities have been popular
because
of their physical appearance and such Kim Kardashian. Her reality television program never
shows
any world
class
acting quality,
but
only
shows
about her luxurious mansions and fancy cars. And then there are other celebrities who are well known due to his/her social dignity as the son or the daughter of a wealthy family. One of the examples would be Paris Hilton.
Indeed
, she has
many
bad
attitudes, she is
still
popular
because
she inherits the assets of her parents.
Although traditional values such as respect others, being responsible, honesty and integrity seem to
be forgotten
nowadays,
but
they
still
play an
important
part in
many
communities. In common cases, employers are
still
assessing their potential employees based their
hard working
attitude,
positive
behaviour
and their integrity. And then business
people
are
still
looking for business partners who are reliable, can
be trusted
, and dependable.
Therefore
, it is
important
for adults to educate their children about these
positive
values
because
they
still
play an essential part in the societies.
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