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At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v.3

At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v. 3
The media has a significant impact on the way people live their life. This essay will discuss how the media shapes how people think about world events and suggests that this is a negative development because it endangers democracy. Most people take newspapers and TV news at face value and do not think about it very critically. This leads to them believing everything they read or hear on television and this can have a serious impact on how they view the world and can lead to them having a distorted view of certain key issues. Take the current refugee crisis as a perfect example, where the UK press reported the refugees as ‘migrants’ who were looking to swamp the UK and take advantage of their relative economic prosperity, when in reality these people were simply fleeing war torn countries and had no other choice but to leave. This distortion means that governments and corporations can influence the media and get them to spin a narrative that suits their agenda, which is very dangerous for democracy. A healthy democracy must have a free press that is critical of the state and big business and if it does not, democracy will be in peril. For example, it has been shown that Fox News regularly tells lies about the Democratic Party and seeks to support the Republican Party, which is very disturbing when you consider that tens of millions of people tune in to Fox News every day. In conclusion, the media affects our views of the world by telling us what to think and unless people make up their own minds rather than blindly believing whatever they hear or read, democracy is threatened.
The media has a significant impact on the way
people
live
their life. This essay will discuss how
the


media
shapes how
people
think
about world
events
and suggests that this is a
negative
development
because
it endangers democracy.

Most
people
take newspapers and TV news at face value and do not
think
about it
very
critically
. This leads to them believing everything they read or hear on television and this can have a serious impact on how they view the world and can lead to them having a distorted view of certain key issues. Take the
current
refugee crisis as a perfect example, where the UK press reported the refugees as ‘migrants’ who were looking to swamp the UK and take advantage of their relative economic prosperity, when in reality these
people
were
simply
fleeing war torn countries and had no other choice
but
to
leave
.

This distortion means that
governments
and corporations can influence the media and
get
them to spin a narrative that suits their agenda, which is
very
dangerous
for
democracy
. A healthy
democracy
must
have a free press
that is
critical of the state and
big
business and if it does not,
democracy
will be in peril.
For example
, it has
been shown
that Fox News
regularly
tells
lies about the Democratic Party and seeks to support the Republican Party, which is
very
disturbing when you consider that tens of millions of
people
tune in to Fox News every day.

In conclusion
, the media affects our views of the world by telling us what to
think
and unless
people
make
up their
own
minds
rather
than
blindly
believing whatever they hear or read,
democracy
is threatened
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
281 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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