Today, the high sales of consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.1
Today, the high sales of consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. with this opinion? v. 1
In recent times, the demand of consumer goods has increased rapidly. Thesedays, the consumption of consumer goods have increased due to the strong promotion rather than the increase of real need. I completely agree with this statement and will elaborate my point of view in subsequent paragraphs.
In last few years, power of advertising has changed the buying pattern of consumer goods. Few years back people used to buy those things that they need, however, nowadays, the things which are being purchased are luxurious. For example, the trend of buying new cars has dramatically increased over the past few years. Although, most of the people can not afford it to buy on their own, they take loans from banks and buy it, even though, they do not need of their own car but they just get influenced from bank advertisement.
After that, the consumption of ready made food has also increased over the last decade or so. Though, these are extremely bad for health and costly aswell, the sales of these food going high as the time progressing. For instance, there was no concept of freezing food in 1990's, but today, we can find freezing food in almost every house. Although, these foods cause heart problems and as well as obesity problems. Even though, people consuming these foodd more and more, just because of advertisement they see on television or social networking websites.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I agree with the statement that has been given in the question that most of the things people buy these days are the result of strong advertisement rather than they need them.
In recent times, the demand of consumer
goods
has
increased
rapidly
.
Thesedays
, the consumption of consumer
goods
have
increased
due to the strong promotion
rather
than the increase of real
need
. I completely
agree
with this statement and will elaborate my point of view in subsequent paragraphs.
In last few years, power of advertising has
changed
the buying pattern of consumer
goods
. Few years back
people
used
to
buy
those things that they
need
,
however
, nowadays, the things which are being
purchased
are luxurious.
For example
, the trend of buying new cars has
dramatically
increased
over the past few years. Although, most of the
people
can not afford it to
buy
on their
own
, they take loans from banks and
buy
it,
even though
, they do not
need
of their
own
car
but
they
just
get
influenced from bank advertisement.
After that, the consumption of
ready made
food
has
also
increased
over the last decade or
so
. Though, these are
extremely
bad
for health and costly
aswell
, the sales of these
food
going high as the time progressing.
For instance
, there was no concept of freezing
food
in 1990's
,
but
today
, we can find freezing
food
in almost every
house
. Although, these
foods
cause heart problems and
as well
as obesity problems.
Even though
,
people
consuming these
foodd
more and more,
just
because
of advertisement they
see
on television or social networking websites.
In conclusion
, I would like to say that I
agree
with the statement that has been
given
in the question that most of the things
people
buy
these days are the result of strong advertisement
rather
than they
need
them.
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