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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. v.1

To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. v. 1
Environmental or natural hazards are the result of physical processes that affect humans every day. As the use of fuel increases to keep up with modern demands, the world is becoming more vulnerable to environmental hazards and disasters. Floods, earthquakes, severe thunderstorms, toxic or oil spill immediately comes to mind when comprehending this issue, implying that all these things are inherent hazards One of the most effective solutions to these environmental hazards is to raise the price of fuel. The use of petroleum and gasoline can release toxic chemicals into our atmosphere. These chemicals escape into the air during refilling, from the gasoline tank and carburettor during normal operation, and from engine exhaust. Transportation sources account for about 30-50 ℅ of all harmful emissions into the atmosphere. Smog is another environmental hazard, it causes human respiratory stress, and damages many plants, significantly reducing farm crop yields and the health of trees and other vegetation. Burning gasoline emits significant quantities of a wide range of harmful gases into the atmosphere. For example, carbon monoxide is a poisonous gas produced by incomplete combustion. Carbon dioxide, a normal product of burning fuel, is non-toxic, but contributes to the greenhouse effect, which is also known as global warming. Raising the price of fuel would mean that people would use less petroleum and gasoline. They would find other alternative means of transport to save money, which would mean using less high-priced fuel for everyday purposes. For example, cycling is a healthy activity and it saves the earth too. Also, for a long journey people could try to find friends together for car-pooling that saves a lot of fuel and money too. Many environmental hazards like smog and global warming are increasing around the world due to the excessive use of petroleum and gasoline in our daily lives. Raising the price of fuel could make all the difference to the environment. It would force people to use petrol in a more responsible way and use it less, and therefore be the most effective solution to the problem of ever-increasing environmental biological hazards.
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Environmental
or natural
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hazards
are the result of physical processes that affect humans every day. As the
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use
of
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fuel
increases to
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keep
up with modern demands, the world is becoming more vulnerable to
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environmental
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hazards
and disasters. Floods, earthquakes, severe thunderstorms, toxic or oil spill immediately
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comes
to mind when comprehending this issue, implying that all these things are inherent hazards

One of the most effective solutions to these
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environmental
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hazards
is to raise the price of
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fuel
. The
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use
of petroleum and
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gasoline
can release toxic chemicals into our atmosphere. These chemicals escape into the air during refilling, from the
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gasoline
tank and
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carburettor
during normal operation, and from engine exhaust. Transportation sources account for about 30-50 ℅ of all harmful emissions into the atmosphere.

Smog is another
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environmental
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hazard
, it causes human respiratory
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stress
, and damages
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many
plants,
significantly
reducing farm crop yields and the health of trees and other vegetation. Burning
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gasoline
emits significant quantities of a wide range of harmful gases into the atmosphere.
For example
, carbon monoxide is a poisonous gas produced by incomplete combustion. Carbon dioxide, a normal product of burning
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fuel
, is non-toxic,
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but
contributes to the greenhouse effect, which is
also
known as global warming.

Raising the price of
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fuel
would mean that
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people
would
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use
less petroleum and
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gasoline
. They would find other alternative means of transport to save money, which would mean using less high-priced
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fuel
for everyday purposes.
For example
, cycling is a healthy activity and it saves the earth too.
Also
, for a long journey
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people
could try to find friends together for car-pooling that saves
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a lot of
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fuel
and money too.

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Many
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environmental
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hazards
like smog and global warming are increasing around the world due to the excessive
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use
of petroleum and
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gasoline
in our daily
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lives
. Raising the price of
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fuel
could
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make
all the difference to the environment. It would force
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people
to
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use
petrol in a more responsible way and
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use
it less, and
therefore
be the most effective solution to the problem of ever-increasing
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environmental
biological
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hazards
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
346 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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