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These days many people interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food What are some reason people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price? v.1

These days many people interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food What are some reason people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price? v. 1
Recently, it has been seen that organic food, which is produced without using any pesticides and preservatives, is gaining ground in many countries. In spite of its exorbitant price, there are many people who prefer to use organic fruits, vegetables, milk, and meat etcetera. This is because of healthy nature of this food and combined with the nutritional values. I believe that if organic food is available in the region and it is affordable to regional people, then they might spend money on it. Let us begin with elucidating numerous benefits provided by organic food. Firstly, as this is cultivated without using any pesticides, nutritious values remain preserved in it and keeps its consumer physically and mentally fit. Secondly, organic farming techniques take care that no chemical would get used to increase the yield of a product. Also, organic farming practice is devoid of adulteration or mixing of spurious products, which result in production of nature friendly consumable items, which does not pose any health hazard unlike the commercially grown products. Even, recent health studies have shown that consumption of organic food keeps many deadly diseases like heart attack and cancer away. However, at the same time, there is a question, whether is it important to buy such an expensive food? Even, organic food is not easily available in all countries, till now it is popular only among the people of wealthy nations. I opine that it depends on the affordability of a person, if he can pay the cost of organic items. And if someone has money, then he should opt the option to consume organic food rather than the one produced using conventional methods. Additionally, governments should try to curtail its prices and encourage the research to find new techniques in order to lessen the cost incurred in the cultivation process. To conclude, despite its extravagant nature, many people in developed countries prefer to use organic products only and this is owing to the health benefits they get from it. At the same time, authorities should encourage the organic farming industry by funding this area of cultivation and should try to provide subsidy so that it can become affordable to the middle class citizens.
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that
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, which
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many
countries.
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its exorbitant price, there are
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many
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people
who prefer to
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use
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organic
fruits, vegetables, milk, and meat etcetera. This is
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because
of healthy nature of this
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food
and combined with the nutritional values. I believe that if
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organic
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food
is available in the region and it is affordable to regional
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people
, then they might spend money on it.

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us
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begin
with elucidating numerous benefits provided by
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organic
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food
.
Firstly
, as this
is cultivated
without using any pesticides, nutritious values remain preserved in it and
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keeps
its consumer
physically
and mentally fit.
Secondly
,
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organic
farming techniques take care that no chemical would
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get
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used
to increase the yield of a
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product
.
Also
,
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organic
farming practice is devoid of adulteration or mixing of spurious
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products
, which result in production of nature friendly consumable items, which does not pose any health hazard unlike the
commercially
grown
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products
. Even, recent health studies have shown that consumption of
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organic
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food
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keeps
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many
deadly diseases like heart attack and cancer away.

However
, at the same time, there is a question, whether is it
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important
to
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buy
such an expensive
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food
? Even,
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organic
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food
is not
easily
available in all countries, till
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now
it is popular
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only
among the
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people
of wealthy nations. I opine that it depends on the affordability of a person, if he can pay the cost of
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organic
items. And if someone has money, then he should opt the option to consume
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organic
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food
rather
than the one produced using conventional methods.
Additionally
,
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governments
should try to curtail its prices and encourage the research to find new techniques in order to lessen the cost incurred in the cultivation process.

To conclude
, despite its extravagant nature,
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many
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people
in
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developed countries
prefer to
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use
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organic
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products
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only
and this is owing to the health benefits they
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get
from it. At the same time, authorities should encourage the
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organic
farming industry by funding this area of cultivation and should try to provide subsidy
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so
that it can become affordable to the middle
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class
citizens.
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay These days many people interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food What are some reason people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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