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These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is oftenmore expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is importantto buy organic food despite the higher v.2

These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is oftenmore expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is importantto buy organic food despite the higher v. 2
The sale of organic food is increasing day by day. The majority of the people prefer to eat organic food rather than eating conventionally produced food. In my opinion, everyone is doing hard work to eat good food whether it’s high price or not and organic food can be considered as best out of all. While reading newspapers, we usually read that people are dying because of eating bad food or food mixed with chemicals. For instance, there was a girl who died after eating bottle guard. After eating it, her lips colour changed to blue. After detailed analysis, doctors said, her body was full of poison. This happened because that bottle guard was made using chemically originated fertilizers. On the other side of it, organic foods are cultivated using fertilizers which make the food completely nutritious. These foods are kept under proper temperature and cultivated using pure and genuine fertilizers. Once the food is ready to eat, it should pass the various tests: firstly, sugar level test is done. Then another test is done which measures the amount of different vitamins in the food. Then a test is done checking whether food has any poisonous material or not. Once the food passes all the tests, it will send to the market for selling. However, if it fails any of the tests then farmer fed that food to animals. Due to these tests, the amount of organic food is always high. On contrary to it, in conventionally produced food, none of the tests have been done. To conclude, organic food is preferably the best food. Food is one of the 3 basic needs of life. Everyone should eat organic food as it will improve our health and no one can deny that “Health is wealth”.
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organic
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food
is increasing day by day. The majority of the
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people
prefer to
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eat
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organic
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food
rather
than
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eating
conventionally
produced
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food
. In my opinion, everyone is doing
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hard
work to
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eat
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good
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food
whether it’s high price or not and
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organic
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food
can
be considered
as best out of all.

While reading newspapers, we
usually
read that
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people
are dying
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because
of
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eating
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bad
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food
or
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food
mixed with chemicals.
For instance
, there was a girl who
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died
after
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eating
bottle guard. After
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eating
it, her lips
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colour
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changed
to blue. After detailed analysis, doctors said, her body was full of poison. This happened
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because
that bottle guard
was made
using
chemically
originated fertilizers.

On the other side of it,
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organic
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foods
are cultivated
using fertilizers which
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make
the
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food
completely nutritious. These
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foods
are
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kept
under proper temperature and cultivated using pure and genuine fertilizers. Once the
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food
is ready to
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eat
, it should pass the various
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tests
:
firstly
, sugar level
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test
is done
. Then another
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test
is done
which measures the amount of
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different
vitamins in the
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food
. Then a
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test
is done
checking whether
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food
has any poisonous material or not. Once the
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food
passes all the
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tests
, it will
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send
to the market for selling.
However
, if it fails any of the
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tests
then farmer fed that
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food
to animals. Due to these
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tests
, the amount of
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organic
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food
is always high. On contrary to it, in
conventionally
produced
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food
, none of the
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tests
have
been done
.

To conclude
,
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organic
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food
is
preferably
the best
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food
.
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Food
is one of the 3 basic needs of life. Everyone should
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eat
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organic
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food
as it will
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improve
our health and no one can deny that “Health is wealth”.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is oftenmore expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is importantto buy organic food despite the higher v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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