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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v.4

There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 4
In the current society, the large family is disappearing slowly and having a small family is the running trend. Let us discuss the merits and demerits of having a small family despite of having a large family. The small family consists of two parents and Childrens(one or two). They could support their family maintenance and the monthly budget is low to run the family. The small family can accommodate in a single bedroom house. They can effort their Children to study in good colleges, even they can plan tours at least once a year. Some governments also support small family by providing a monthly benefit. For instance, the Canada government provides monthly 350 dollars for each child. If they have more than 4 children, then they just reduce the amount. In the current society, the large family is disappearing slowly and having a small family is the running trend. Let us discuss the merits and demerits of having a small family despite of having a large family. The small family consists of two parents and Childrens(one or two). They could support their family maintenance and the monthly budget is low to run the family. The small family can accommodate in a single bedroom house. They can effort their Children to study in good colleges, even they can plan tours at least once a year. Some governments also support small family by providing a monthly benefit. For instance, the Canada government provides monthly 350 dollars for each child. If they have more than 4 children, then they just reduce the amount.
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maintenance and the
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budget is low to run the
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small
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can accommodate in a single bedroom
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society, the
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large
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family
is disappearing
slowly
and
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having
a
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small
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family
is the running trend.
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us discuss the merits and demerits of
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having
a
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small
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family
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despite of
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having
a
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large
family.

The
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small
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family
consists of two parents and
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Childrens
(one or two). They could
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support
their
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family
maintenance and the
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monthly
budget is low to run the
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family
. The
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small
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family
can accommodate in a single bedroom
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house
. They
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can effort
their
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Children
to study in
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good
colleges, even they can plan tours at least once a year.
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Some
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governments
also
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support
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small
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family
by providing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
monthly
benefit.
For instance
, the Canada
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government
provides
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monthly
350 dollars for each child. If they have more than 4
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
, then they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the amount.
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IELTS essay There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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