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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v.5

There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 5
A developing tendency all over the world that is having a small household rather than a large household. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the tendency with relevant examples. The disadvantages of a small household. By planning a small household, our population is reduced, as a result, it impacts our economic growth and for this reason, many countries are not getting developed. For example, Africa in which are less population so that sometimes they hires many workers from different countries to do work in many sectors, consequently there capital goes to other countries. On the other hand, there are many advantages of small household, such as, reduce the family cost, parent’s gives proper education for their child and also develops economic growth. The advantages of a large household is a lot of inheritors, by this trend, population is increased and also country has been developed. In opposite side, there are several disadvantages, firstly, parents do not give proper time their children’s, so, children’s has gone toward bad path, secondly, a large family has to face so many problems, thirdly, population has increased by this trend, as a result, the number of poverty gradually went up and also pollutions. Such as, in Bangladesh, there are so many problems such as poverty, pollutions and populations, only the reason of large household trend. In conclusion, large family has more problems than small family, so that's why, people likes small family and the trend of a small family are increasing day by day around the world.
A developing tendency all over the world
that is
having a
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small
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household
rather
than a
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large
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household
. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the tendency with relevant examples.

The disadvantages of a
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small
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household
. By planning a
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small
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household
, our
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population
is
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reduced
,
as a result
, it impacts our economic growth and
for this reason
,
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many
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countries
are not getting developed.
For example
, Africa in which are less
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population
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so
that
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sometimes
they
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hires
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many
workers from
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different
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countries
to do work in
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many
sectors,
consequently
there capital goes to other
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countries
.
On the other hand
, there are
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many
advantages of
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small
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household
, such as,
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reduce
the
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family
cost, parent’s gives proper education for their child and
also
develops economic growth.

The advantages of a
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large
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household
is
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a lot of
inheritors, by this trend,
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population
is increased
and
also
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country
has
been developed
. In opposite side, there are several disadvantages,
firstly
, parents do not give proper time their children’s,
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so
, children’s has gone toward
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bad
path,
secondly
, a
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large
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family
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has to
face
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so
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many
problems,
thirdly
,
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population
has increased by this trend,
as a result
, the number of poverty
gradually
went up and
also
pollutions. Such as, in Bangladesh, there are
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so
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many
problems such as poverty, pollutions and
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populations
,
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only
the reason of
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large
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household
trend.

In conclusion
,
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large
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family
has more problems than
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small
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family
,
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so
that's why,
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people
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likes
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small
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family
and the trend of a
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small
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family
are increasing day by day around the world.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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