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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v.22

There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 22
In the previous years, people practiced communal living and big family size was a way of life. However, lately, there is a colossal upsurge globally for want of lesser family size over big families. It is advantageous to have a fewer size of family owing to the fact that it is more likely to ensure overall well-being of its members, but there are some drawbacks which need to be taken into account. There are a number of plus points to small family. First, it has a more likelihood of bringing forth individuals with a better life. That is to say, with lesser number of family members, there is a greater access to an adequate diet, better health care and life in general. Moreso, children from this kind of family have more chances of attending the best schools which give them an edge in the society in the long run. In addition, parents are able to focus their offspring and raise responsible citizens who can contribute positively to the growth and development of a Nation. On the other hand, despite the merits above, some pitfalls still exist. Parents in the small family settings are usually over protective over their children because there are not a lot of them; the children are restricted from blending with other members of the society. This can make the children too reliant on their guardians over things that can sometimes be sorted out themselves. Also, the do not have the opportunity to be as versatile as they would have been of they are exposed to larger family members. For instance, young ones are able to learn different skills and manners from various members of a larger family. In conclusion, while is a more and more increased preference for smaller family size, people should be wary of the disadvantages like overly dependent citizens that it brings.
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was a way of life.
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, lately, there is a colossal upsurge globally for want of lesser
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family
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size
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over
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big
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families
. It is advantageous to have a fewer
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size
of
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family
owing to the fact that it is more likely to ensure
overall
well-being of its
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members
,
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There are a number of plus points to
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small
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.
First
, it has a more likelihood of bringing forth individuals with a better life.
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to say, with lesser number of
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, there is a greater access to an adequate diet, better health care and life
in general
.
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Moreso
,
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from this kind of
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have more chances of attending the best schools which give them an edge in the society in the long run.
In addition
, parents are able to focus their offspring and raise responsible citizens who can contribute
positively
to the growth and development of a Nation.

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, despite the merits above,
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exist. Parents in the
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settings are
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too reliant on their guardians
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things that can
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be sorted
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not have the opportunity to be as versatile as they would have been of they
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, young ones are able to learn
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skills
and manners from various
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In conclusion
, while is a more and more increased preference for smaller
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,
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people
should be wary of the disadvantages like
overly
dependent citizens that it brings.
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IELTS essay There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family? v. 22

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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Task Achievement: 8.0
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