There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. v. 1
It has been argued that the lack of housing in towns lead to unbearable social issues and merely the government authorities have the capability to handle those problems. However, I completely disagree with the statement because there are other platforms to resolve these issues.
Firstly, considering the individual contribution towards the society, can minimize the problems due to lack of houses. In other words, in order to reduce the problems everyone need to treat these social issues as their responsibility. By having enough support of individuals, the majority of issues related to housing will be resolved. Moreover, considering it as an individual problem, thus people can sort out the issues of community level. With the resolution of every community, apparently it leads to solve the nations.
Apart from the individuals help, we do have several organizations whose primary focus is to look after the various accommodation related issues. As part of companies, by providing enormous support in terms of funds, awareness about the problem, and by precautionary measurements to avoid those unnecessary housing issues. In addition to that, with the limited functions of oraganization result in a drastic decrease in society concerns. For instance, in India, over 70 per cenatge of issues will be solved by handling them as community level instead treating them as the government responsibility to resolve.
To conclude, in my view, the social issues will treated as negligible and able to provide proper solutions with enormous support of individual and other communities.
It has
been argued
that the lack of housing in towns lead to unbearable social
issues
and
merely
the
government
authorities have the capability to handle those
problems
.
However
, I completely disagree with the statement
because
there are other platforms to resolve these issues.
Firstly
, considering the
individual
contribution towards the society, can minimize the
problems
due to lack of
houses
.
In other words
, in order to
reduce
the
problems
everyone need to treat these social
issues
as their responsibility. By having
enough
support of
individuals
, the majority of
issues
related to housing will
be resolved
.
Moreover
, considering it as an
individual
problem
,
thus
people
can sort out the
issues
of
community
level. With the resolution of every
community
,
apparently
it leads to solve the nations.
Apart from the
individuals
help
, we do have several organizations whose primary focus is to look after the various accommodation related
issues
. As part of
companies
, by providing enormous support in terms of funds, awareness about the
problem
, and by precautionary measurements to avoid those unnecessary housing
issues
.
In addition
to that, with the limited functions of
oraganization
result in a drastic decrease in society concerns.
For instance
, in India, over 70 per
cenatge
of
issues
will
be solved
by handling them as
community
level
instead
treating them as the
government
responsibility to resolve.
To conclude
, in my view, the social
issues
will treated as negligible and able to provide proper solutions with enormous support of
individual
and other
communities
.
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22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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