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There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion? v.1

There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion? v. 1
ANCIENT LANGUAGES ARE AT THE EXTINCT LEVEL. MANY MASS BELIEVE THAT LESS LANGUAGES REDUCE THE BARRIER IN BETWEEN PEOPLE WORLDWIDE. THIS ESSAY WILL TOTALLY CONCUR TO THE ABOVE STATEMENT BECAUSE OF ENORMOUS POSITIVE IMPACTS THAN NEGATIVE WHICH IS MENTIONED BELOW. ON THE ONE HAND. THE MAJOR ADVANTAGE OF THE FEWER LANGUAGES IS THAT IT WILL ALLOW PEOPLE TO COMMUNICATE EFFECTIVLY WITH EACHOTHER. TO ILLISTRATE, WHEN LESS LANGUAGE PRESENT, IT IS POSSIBLE FOR PEOPLE TO KNOW DIVERT CULTURES FROM AROUND THE WORLD. BECAUSE THE COMMON DILECT MAKE THEM EASIER TO UNDERSTAND IN DEPTH. FURTHERMORE, THERE WOULD BE NONE RACISM THAT NUMBER OF MASS FACING TODAY. CONSEQUENTLY, INCREASE THE ECONOMY OF THE NATION BY TOURISM. FOR AN EXAMPLE, UK STUDY HAVE SHOWN THAT WHEN THERE IS ONE COMMON SPEECH, ATTRACT THE MORE PEOPLE TO VISIT THE NATION, HAVE EXPLORE THE CULTURE MORE EFFECTIVELY. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE DISADVANTAGE OF THE LESS SPOKEN LANGUAGE IS THAT, IT LEADS TO MIGRATION OF PEOPLE FROM ONE TERRITORY TO OTHER AND THIS AFFECTS THE DEVELOPING COUNTRY IMMENSLY. TO EXPLAN, PEOPLE WILL TEND TO MOVE TO WEALHTY NATION AS IT IS EFFORT LESS TO LAND THERE. THUS, IT WILL MAKE IMMIGRATION COUNTRY MORE CRAMPPED. FOR INSTANCE, IN THE PRESENT SCENERIO, ENGLISH IS BECOMING FRIST ACCENT FOR MANY COUNTRY DUE TO EXPANSION OF BUSINESS INDUSTRIES. OVERALL, LANGUAGES INDEED FUNDAMENTAL REQUIREMENT TO SURVIVE IN THIS MODERNWORLD WHERE INDIVIDUALS HAVE DREAM TO LIVE HIGH-CLASS LIFE. BUT I THINK THE NATIVE LANGUAGE HAS ITS OWN RESPECT AND HISTORY. ITS IS BENEFIACL TO HAVE LESS LANGUAGES BUT ALSO GOVERNMENT AND INDIVIDUALS SHOULD OPT TO TAKE SOME ACTION TO PRESERVE THEIR MOTHERTOUNGE.
ANCIENT
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LANGUAGES
ARE AT THE EXTINCT LEVEL.
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MANY
MASS BELIEVE THAT
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LESS
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LANGUAGES
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REDUCE
THE BARRIER IN BETWEEN
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PEOPLE
WORLDWIDE. THIS ESSAY WILL
TOTALLY
CONCUR TO THE ABOVE STATEMENT
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BECAUSE
OF ENORMOUS
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POSITIVE
IMPACTS THAN
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NEGATIVE
WHICH
IS MENTIONED
BELOW.

ON THE ONE HAND. THE MAJOR ADVANTAGE OF THE FEWER
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LANGUAGES
IS THAT IT WILL
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ALLOW
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PEOPLE
TO COMMUNICATE
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EFFECTIVLY
WITH
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EACHOTHER
. TO
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ILLISTRATE
, WHEN
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LESS
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LANGUAGE
PRESENT, IT IS POSSIBLE FOR
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PEOPLE
TO KNOW DIVERT CULTURES FROM AROUND THE WORLD.
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BECAUSE
THE COMMON
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DILECT
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MAKE
THEM EASIER TO UNDERSTAND IN DEPTH.
FURTHERMORE
, THERE WOULD BE NONE RACISM THAT NUMBER OF MASS FACING
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TODAY
.
CONSEQUENTLY
, INCREASE THE ECONOMY OF THE NATION BY TOURISM. FOR AN EXAMPLE, UK STUDY HAVE SHOWN THAT WHEN THERE IS ONE COMMON SPEECH, ATTRACT THE MORE
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PEOPLE
TO VISIT THE NATION, HAVE
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EXPLORE
THE CULTURE MORE
EFFECTIVELY
.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE DISADVANTAGE OF THE
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LESS
SPOKEN
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LANGUAGE
IS THAT, IT LEADS TO MIGRATION OF
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PEOPLE
FROM ONE TERRITORY TO OTHER AND THIS AFFECTS THE
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DEVELOPING COUNTRY
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IMMENSLY
. TO
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EXPLAN
,
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PEOPLE
WILL TEND TO
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MOVE
TO
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WEALHTY
NATION AS IT IS EFFORT
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LESS
TO LAND THERE.
THUS
, IT WILL
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MAKE
IMMIGRATION COUNTRY MORE
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CRAMPPED
.
FOR INSTANCE
, IN THE PRESENT
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SCENERIO
, ENGLISH IS BECOMING
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FRIST
ACCENT FOR
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MANY
COUNTRY DUE TO EXPANSION OF BUSINESS INDUSTRIES.

OVERALL
,
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LANGUAGES
INDEED
FUNDAMENTAL REQUIREMENT TO SURVIVE IN THIS
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MODERNWORLD
WHERE INDIVIDUALS HAVE
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DREAM
TO
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LIVE
HIGH-
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CLASS
LIFE.
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BUT
I
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THINK
THE NATIVE
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LANGUAGE
HAS ITS
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OWN
RESPECT AND HISTORY. ITS IS
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BENEFIACL
TO HAVE
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LESS
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LANGUAGES
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BUT
ALSO
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GOVERNMENT
AND INDIVIDUALS SHOULD OPT TO TAKE
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SOME
ACTION TO PRESERVE THEIR
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MOTHERTOUNGE
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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