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The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article Sate her opinion and explain t he reasons she gives for holding the opinion. v.1

The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article Sate her opinion and explain t he reasons she gives for holding the opinion. v. 1
In the modern world, soft skills are vital for the individuals, if they are willing to achieve their goals. In this regard, there is an opinion that public speaking skill should be taught at school in order to prepare students for the real life. There is no denying that if the person intends to become a public figure and accomplish his/her purposes, he/she is supposed to behave herself/himself openly and independently in front of the public. In this reason, many people believe that it would be beneficial for the students, if they acquire this skill at schools. A good illustration of this is Scandinavian schools, where students get maximum independence. It is true that they have a chance to communicate with other people and collaborate with their peers. Consequently, they get an opportunity to sharp their soft skills in order to make public speakings. On the other hand, many individuals believe that concentrating on the academic field is essential for the academic institutions, such as schools and universities. In this regard, they should not pay attention on the interpersonal skills, such as public speaking, because it takes a lot of effort and energy. However, it is not beneficial for the whole students. That is to say, only limited numbers of learners can get profit from these courses. For instance, there is a wide range of courses, where the students can learn how to make performances in front of the people. In conclusion, although focusing on the academic subject is essential for the learners, gaining the knowledge about how to speak publicly can be helpful for their future.
In the modern world, soft
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skills
are vital for the individuals, if they are willing to achieve their goals. In this regard, there is an opinion that
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public
speaking
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skill
should
be taught
at
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school
in order to prepare
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students
for the real life.

There is no denying that if the person intends to become a
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public
figure and accomplish his/her purposes, he/she
is supposed
to behave herself/himself
openly
and
independently
in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
. In this reason,
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that it would be beneficial for the
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students
, if they acquire this
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skill
at
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schools
. A
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good
illustration of this is Scandinavian
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schools
, where
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students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
maximum independence. It is true that they have a chance to communicate with other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and collaborate with their peers.
Consequently
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an opportunity to sharp their soft
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skills
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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public
speakings.

On the other hand
,
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many
individuals believe that concentrating on the academic field is essential for the academic institutions, such as
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schools
and universities. In this regard, they should not pay attention on the interpersonal
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skills
, such as
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public
speaking,
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because
it takes
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a lot of
effort and energy.
However
, it is not beneficial for the whole
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students
.
That is
to say,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
limited numbers of learners can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
profit from these courses.
For instance
, there is a wide range of courses, where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can learn how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
performances in front of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

In conclusion
, although focusing on the academic subject is essential for the learners, gaining the knowledge about how to speak
publicly
can be helpful for their future.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article Sate her opinion and explain t he reasons she gives for holding the opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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