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The emotional development in children is important to how a child might act when they are older. Studies show that a loving touch during an infant's life can prevent certain aggressive behaviors in children. They found that a parent's loving nat v.1

The emotional development in children is important to how a child might act when they are older. Studies show that a loving touch during an infant's life can prevent certain aggressive behaviors in children. They found that a parent's loving nat v. 1
In the contemporary world, Physicians mention that modern people do not generally spend time to sport activities. What are reasons of inactivity? What steps encourage humans to be lively. Inactivity is among the most serious problems our society faces nowadays Inactivity is an ongoing concern which many nationals have to deal with Lack of exercise lead to health problems There are several causes of this alarming trend, but measures could be certainly taken to tackle the problem Humans ‘s inaction can be caused by the condition of the world. People do usually spend time on gym when they study at school. After graduating from school, students make an afford to create their own life. Therefore, common people usually waste time about 10 12 hours on the back of the computer on per day Therefore, heavy job and lack of time do not allow people to improve their physical power. The second reason is underdeveloped structures of cities and town. The half percentage of people cannot do exercise due to lack of gyms. Finally, because people feel healthier at young ages, they think it is not necessary to send time in sport centres Fortunately, there are a number of solutions to address the problem. One way to fix problem would be for humans to make well schedule for sport. At the weekend is suitable for sport and jogging. The solution to the problem of not having a sport centre in the vicinity is home sport. People could easily to raise their paschal indicators with self sport at home. Finally, if doctors often aware citizens on TV that they will experience health problems in the future, people will take into account health is the most important In conclusion there are might be other ways to fix the problem, but I strongly believe that the problem can be slowed by countries
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activities. What are reasons of inactivity? What steps encourage humans to be lively.

Inactivity is among the most serious
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problems
our society faces nowadays Inactivity is an ongoing concern which
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many
nationals
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deal with Lack of exercise lead to health problems

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but
measures could be
certainly
taken to tackle the
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problem
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be caused
by the condition of the world.
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usually
spend
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on gym when they study at school. After graduating from school, students
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cannot do exercise due to lack of gyms.
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, there are a number of solutions to address the
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. One way to
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well schedule for
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. At the weekend is suitable for
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sport
and jogging. The solution to the
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problem
of not having a
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sport
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.
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, if doctors
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aware citizens on TV that they will experience health
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in the future,
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,
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IELTS essay The emotional development in children is important to how a child might act when they are older. Studies show that a loving touch during an infant's life can prevent certain aggressive behaviors in children. They found that a parent's loving nat v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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