The United Nations is the intergovernmental organization, responsible for making international peace and security. They work for the betterment of the world and had recently celebrated their 70th anniversary. During this time, they had made tremendous efforts for the development of people of different sectors at different levels and has also achieved multiple global awards, out of which some examples are discussed below.
To begin with, the first example is the Nobel Peace Prize, which they were presented with for saving life of 90 million children by gathering funds for them. They had made huge efforts by convincing various organizational sectors to create funds for the underprivileged ones. This was their major contribution to the World.
Another giant achievement of the soul reliever is the complete eradication of the disease called smallpox, with the help of their agency called World Health Organization. They have run the immunization campaign for almost 13 years to take this disorder to complete extinction.
They had also created a big history in protecting Ozone layer. Ozone is important to protect the humans on earth from different substances or chemicals that approach towards them. They have sponsored 21 countries to take a pledge to take action against deterioration of the Ozone layer caused by various chemical substances that are usually waste material of manufacturing industries that reaches the sky. Hence, a great contribution has been done by them for our safety.
In a nutshell, the United Nations deserves to celebrate the 70th anniversary in response of the global struggles for human race, and if they continue to work at a same pace, they are likely to survive the next 70 years too.
The United Nations is the intergovernmental organization, responsible for making international peace and security. They work for the betterment of the world and had recently celebrated their 70th anniversary. During this time, they had made tremendous efforts for the development of
people
of
different
sectors at
different
levels and has
also
achieved multiple global awards, out of which
some
examples
are discussed
below.
To
begin
with, the
first
example is the Nobel Peace Prize, which they
were presented
with for saving life of 90 million children by gathering funds for them. They had made huge efforts by convincing various organizational sectors to create funds for the underprivileged ones. This was their major contribution to the World.
Another giant achievement of the soul reliever is the complete eradication of the disease called smallpox, with the
help
of their agency called World Health Organization. They have run the immunization campaign for almost 13 years to take this disorder to complete extinction.
They had
also
created a
big
history in protecting Ozone layer. Ozone is
important
to protect the humans on earth from
different
substances or chemicals that approach towards them. They have sponsored 21 countries to take a pledge to take action against deterioration of the Ozone layer caused by various chemical substances that are
usually
waste material of manufacturing industries that reaches the sky.
Hence
, a great contribution has
been done
by them for our safety.
In a nutshell, the United Nations deserves to celebrate the 70th anniversary in response of the global struggles for human race, and if they continue to work at a same pace, they are likely to survive the
next
70 years too.
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