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The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary. v.1

The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010.
A serious problem which all the world has faced in recent years is the destruction of forests by logging company for personal aims such as paper production and constructing roads and buildings. Deforestation is increasing alarmingly, and all the individual and governmental preserving are immediately needed. Educating people about the vital role of forests can be beneficial to save the jungles. People should be taught about the impact of deforestation due to human activity in order to understand their importance. For instance, children can be educated from childhood in their schools, or there can be advertisements on billboards in the streets about the advantages of environmental protection, especially forests, which are the habitats of animals and lungs of the earth. By right cultivation, deforestation will remarkably decline in each country. Not only could we raise social awareness, but recycling could also play a significant role in addressing this problem. By separating paper such as household waste and placing it in a special basket, each person could help to recycle the paper and decline demanding of it. In addition, we could remake many things such as pens and cardboard boxes from recycled paper. Setting discounts for buying things that made of recycling papers is another practical solution and people could help the paper recycling industry by buying these products. Deforestation caused by human activities in many countries has various detrimental results for the environment. To address this issue, some solutions can be considered. Education, Cycling, Encouraging people to buy recycled products can be effective to solve this problem.
A serious problem which all the world has faced in recent years is the destruction of forests by logging
company
for personal aims such as paper production and constructing roads and buildings. Deforestation is increasing
alarmingly
, and all the individual and governmental preserving are immediately needed.

Educating
people
about the vital role of forests can be beneficial to save the jungles.
People
should
be taught
about the impact of deforestation due to human activity in order to understand their importance.
For instance
, children can
be educated
from childhood in their schools, or there can be advertisements on billboards in the streets about the advantages of environmental protection,
especially
forests, which are the habitats of animals and lungs of the earth. By right cultivation, deforestation will
remarkably
decline in each country.

Not
only
could we raise social awareness,
but
recycling could
also
play a significant role in addressing this problem. By separating paper such as household waste and placing it in a special basket, each person could
help
to recycle the paper and decline demanding of it.
In addition
, we could remake
many
things such as pens and cardboard boxes from recycled paper. Setting discounts for buying things that made of recycling papers is another practical solution and
people
could
help
the paper recycling industry by buying these products.

Deforestation caused by human activities in
many
countries has various detrimental results for the environment. To address this issue,
some
solutions can
be considered
. Education, Cycling, Encouraging
people
to
buy
recycled products can be effective to solve this problem.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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