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Do you agree with statement that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. Personally, I think that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. One of the reasons is because young children can learn to v.1

that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. Personally, I think that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. One of the reasons is because young children can learn to v. 1
Global food scarcity is becoming a boom almost all over the country. Predominantly, most countries rely on neighbouring country's resources such as rice, vegetables, and everyday necessities. People recently facing onion scarcity as the price is getting higher in Tamilnadu. So it demands people need in their daily life. According to the Indian report 2019, 23. 4% of farming land are occupied by industries. As a consequence, 63% of farm workers are intended to do some other jobs. In addition to that, in the year 2006, the government categorically denounced that whoever owned and occupied cultivation lands for industrial purposes should be banished and displaced. As a matter of fact, the effect of farming land used by industrialists, some corporate introduced hybrid seeds which will be grown within 30 days. Because of that, most people enormously look over is genetic modification foods are widespread across the globe. This leads to discover new diseases to the people who frequently use them. On the other hand, the main objective of exporting and importing resources to the neighbourhood, because of excesses or shortages in production. In my opinion, the Overseas community should look over solutions and research why people demanding, how to overcome this problem and what should be the best way to get rid of this. As long as exporting food resources to other countries and culminate in one country's economy is obsolete. So, I would like to suggest administrative tend to keep things which crucially demand around people and if it is excessive after people's contentment, then the government may transport those resources and bring up the economy-level higher would be better.
Global food scarcity is becoming a boom almost all over the country.
Predominantly
, most countries rely on
neighbouring
country's resources such as rice, vegetables, and everyday necessities.
People
recently facing onion scarcity as the price is getting higher in
Tamilnadu
.
So
it demands
people
need in their daily life. According to the Indian report 2019, 23. 4% of farming land
are occupied
by industries. As a consequence, 63% of farm workers
are intended
to do
some
other jobs.

In addition
to that, in the year 2006, the
government
categorically
denounced that whoever
owned
and occupied cultivation lands for industrial purposes should
be banished
and displaced. As a matter of fact, the effect of farming land
used
by industrialists,
some
corporate introduced hybrid seeds which will
be grown
within 30 days.
Because
of that, most
people
enormously
look over is genetic modification foods are widespread across the globe. This leads to discover new diseases to the
people
who
frequently
use
them.

On the other hand
, the main objective of exporting and importing resources to the
neighbourhood
,
because
of excesses or shortages in production. In my opinion, the Overseas community should look over solutions and research why
people
demanding, how to overcome this problem and what should be the best way to
get
rid of this.

As long as exporting food resources to other countries and culminate in one country's economy is obsolete.
So
, I would like to suggest administrative tend to
keep
things which
crucially
demand around
people
and if it is excessive after
people
's contentment, then the
government
may transport those resources and bring up the economy-level higher would be better.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. Personally, I think that all children should be required to learn a second language in school. One of the reasons is because young children can learn to v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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