Latest invention of technology has changed the way of living for the people in the world. Though the internet has made our life more convenient and meaningful, it has significantly affected the social life in the society.
Nowadays, people have become more aware about the things around them than they used to be a few years back. The Internet and it by-product social media has immensely influenced the people. Not only has it given exposure to better their lifestyle, it has made one' s life more convenient. Subsequently, people can now shop products by just clicking on the mobile screen without having to go out in search of it and waste time.
However, this modern way of shopping has made people unhealthy and discourage to stay fit. For instance, people move around less for shopping, and live a sedentary lifestyle. As a result there is less body movement and less cardiovascular activity making them lose their fitness and be exposed to illness.
Furthermore, it has affected the environment as people do not go out shopping frequently and prefer to order goods online. This change impacted the local market negatively.
Moreover, people are more lodged in their handsets and participate less in society events. For example, people stay more connected to friends and family living far away than the person living next door. This has created a huge impact on the society
In conclusion, Although, this trend has definitely helped people to improve their lifestyle and made lives more convenient than ever but affected the soical enviroment and society in general.
Latest
invention of technology has
changed
the way of living for the
people
in the world. Though the internet has made our life more convenient and meaningful, it has
significantly
affected
the social life in the society.
Nowadays,
people
have become more aware about
the things around them
than they
used
to be a few years back. The Internet and
it by-product
social media has
immensely
influenced the
people
. Not
only
has it
given
exposure to better their lifestyle, it has made
one&
#039; s life more convenient.
Subsequently
,
people
can
now
shop products by
just
clicking on the mobile screen without having to go out in search of it and waste time.
However
, this modern way of shopping has made
people
unhealthy and discourage to stay fit.
For instance
,
people
move
around
less
for shopping, and
live
a sedentary lifestyle.
As a result
there is
less
body movement and
less
cardiovascular activity making them lose their fitness and
be exposed
to illness.
Furthermore
, it has
affected
the environment as
people
do not go out shopping
frequently
and prefer to order
goods
online. This
change
impacted the local market
negatively
.
Moreover
,
people
are more lodged in their handsets and participate
less
in society
events
.
For example
,
people
stay more connected to friends and family living far away than the person living
next
door. This has created a huge impact on the
society
In conclusion
, Although, this trend has definitely
helped
people
to
improve
their lifestyle and made
lives
more convenient than ever
but
affected
the
soical
enviroment
and society
in general
.
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