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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v.2

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v. 2
The given tables illustrate the information about the sale of tea and pineapples by Fairtrade in 5 European countries(France, Austria, Germany, Netherlands, and Norway) for the years 2010 and 2015. The first table gives information about the sales of tea, whereas, the second table displays data on pineapples sales. It is evident from the graph that there is an increase in tea sales from 2010 to 2015 for all countries but the sales for pineapples showed a varied trend among all the countries. There is a vast growth of the tea sales in France from the year 2010 to 2015. It also recorded the highest sales among all other countries in 2015. Whereas, Germany, Netherlands, and Norway showed very little growth in tea sales from 2010 to 2015. While Austria’s sales showed decent growth across the 2 years recording revenue of 8 million euros in 2015. The sales of pineapples rocketed in Austria from 2010 to 2015. It recorded a sales of 48 euros which is the highest among all the countries in 2015. France and Netherland showed a good rise in sales from 2010 to 2015 which recorded 6. 5 million euros and 5 euros in 2015 respectively. While the sales for Norway and Germany showed a dip between the years 2010 and 2015.
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tables illustrate the information about the
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of
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tea
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Fairtrade
in 5 European countries(France, Austria, Germany, Netherlands, and Norway) for the years 2010 and 2015. The
first
table gives information about the
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sales
of
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tea
, whereas, the second table displays data on pineapples
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sales
. It is evident from the graph that there is an increase in
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tea
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sales
from 2010 to 2015 for all countries
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but
the
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sales
for pineapples
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a varied trend among all the countries.

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tea
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sales
in France from the
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year
2010 to 2015. It
also
recorded the highest
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sales
among all other countries in 2015. Whereas, Germany, Netherlands, and Norway
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showed
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very
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growth in
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tea
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sales
from 2010 to 2015.
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Austria’s
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decent growth across the 2 years recording revenue of 8 million euros in 2015.

The
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sales
of pineapples rocketed in Austria from 2010 to 2015. It recorded a
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sales
of 48 euros which is the highest among all the countries in 2015. France and
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Netherland
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showed
a
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rise in
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sales
from 2010 to 2015 which recorded 6. 5 million euros and 5 euros in 2015
respectively
. While the
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sales
for Norway and Germany
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showed
a dip between the years 2010 and 2015.
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IELTS essay The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v. 2

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215 words
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