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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v.1

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v. 1
Nowadays, nobody can deny solving or at least reducing traffic is vital, also it affect our urban life in different aspects. However, there are many conventional solutions for a couple of years, but it appears our cities, even metropolitans entire the planet has not overcome the challenge, therefore, we must cite viable ways to tackle it with both infrastructure and technological solutions, as we will see. In fact, the role of urban infrastructure as the backbone of city life eco-system is undeniable, however, with a brief look at Singapore as a role-model for many giant growing cities around the globe, despite different limitations they found public transportation, particularly underground is the most sustainable and practical solution and they were designed the foundation for this problem. On the other hand, cutting down unnecessary travels is possible today and working via internet become more common in our culture, indeed, many people experience heavy congestion as a daily routine in rush hours when they go to work and vice versa, but with technological improvements in data transfer over the internet, for instance, video call, E-mail and etc. There is no more need to physical jobs that require transportation. Eventually, we should rely on the distance-work platforms to decrease the load. To conclude, it seems for the first step as a responsible citizen we can cut down our daily need for movement by viable, modern, and technological solutions with both distance-learning and distance-working. Secondly, public transportation and metro development is crucial for the reduction of traffic load.
Nowadays, nobody can deny solving or at least reducing traffic is vital,
also
it
affect
our urban life in
different
aspects.
However
, there are
many
conventional
solutions
for a couple of years,
but
it appears our cities, even metropolitans entire the planet has not overcome the challenge,
therefore
, we
must
cite viable ways to tackle it with both infrastructure and technological
solutions
, as we will
see
.

In fact, the role of urban infrastructure as the backbone of city life
eco-system
is undeniable,
however
, with a brief look at Singapore as a role-model for
many
giant growing cities around the globe, despite
different
limitations they found public transportation,
particularly
underground is the most sustainable and practical
solution and
they
were designed
the foundation for this problem.

On the other hand
, cutting down unnecessary travels is possible
today
and working via internet become more common in our culture,
indeed
,
many
people
experience heavy congestion as a daily routine in rush hours when they go to work and vice versa,
but
with technological improvements in data transfer over the internet,
for instance
, video call, E-mail
and etc
. There is no more need to physical jobs that require transportation.
Eventually
, we should rely on the distance-work platforms to decrease the load.

To conclude
, it seems for the
first
step as a responsible citizen we can
cut
down our daily need for movement by viable, modern, and technological
solutions
with both distance-learning and distance-working.
Secondly
, public transportation and metro development is crucial for the reduction of traffic load.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. v. 1

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  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
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