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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee andbananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and m v.29

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee andbananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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application to stay in connect their families, friends and the whole world. Despite a few inevitable drawbacks, I believe that
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social
media have
largely
been advantages.

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start
with, there are multifarious merits of
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social
websites. The predominant one is that in the contemporary era,
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people
are workaholic
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why they have not
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enough
time to visit their near and dear ones.
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So
, connecting with them, they give priority to
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social
apps for talking with them. To
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add
more, there are a wide range of applications such as-Facebook, Instagram and WhatsApp
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help
the masses to
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make
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friends all over the world and know about their cultures and languages.
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news
instantly
and fruitful for an environment
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eco
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Turning towards drawbacks, there are
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some
demerits
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as merits. The gigantic disadvantage is that the trend of face to face conversation has decreased
significantly
due to
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social
apps and the masses are giving more preference to
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media
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than spending time with their members of the family. The other biggest demerit is that most of the
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news
, which
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people
read on internet are not reliable that put adverse effect on the mass mind. To exemplify, a majority of
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rumours
are giving about well renowned personalities. Sometime it creates a violence between the persons.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that although
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social
sites are an accurate source to connect the individuals,
yet
it has
also
the few cons. To solve it, the
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government
should upload the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
after checking that it will beneficial or not.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee andbananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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