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the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them
The table illustrates how long do the video advertisements on the Internet play and how long do viewers spend time watching these advertisements. The average length of advertisement varied from 14. 6 seconds for clothing to 45. 8 seconds for public services. The advertisement videos related to travel, entertainment and finance tended to last longer than the others. For example, entertainment and automotive advertisements played 27. 8 and 27. 2 seconds respectively. On the other hand, the length of low-price products being advertised such as clothing, medicine, and consumer electronics is shorter. Consumer electronics advertisement, for example, plays for 15. 3 seconds. Adverts for more expensive products or services tended to be watched for longer than adverts for less expensive items. Viewers on average watched more than 50 percent of advertisements for travel, automotive, and financial services. In contrast, viewers tended to watch less of public service and cheaper goods such as medicine, clothes, and electronics. For instance, viewers spent only 6. 0 seconds watching pharmaceuticals advertisement while it lasted for 16. 3 seconds. To sum up, the length of advertisements and the length of spent viewing are associated with the perceived cost of the product or service being advertised.
The table illustrates how long do the video
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advertisements
on the Internet play and how long do
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viewers
spend time watching these advertisements.

The average
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length
of
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advertisement
varied from 14. 6 seconds for clothing to 45. 8 seconds for public
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services
. The
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advertisement
videos related to travel, entertainment and finance tended to last longer than the others.
For example
, entertainment and automotive
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advertisements
played 27. 8 and 27. 2 seconds
respectively
.
On the other hand
, the
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length
of low-price products
being advertised
such as clothing, medicine, and consumer electronics is shorter. Consumer electronics
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advertisement
,
for example
, plays for 15. 3 seconds.

Adverts for more expensive products or
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services
tended to be
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watched
for longer than adverts for less expensive items.
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Viewers
on average
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watched
more than 50 percent of
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advertisements
for travel, automotive, and financial
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services
.
In contrast
,
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viewers
tended to
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watch
less of public
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service
and cheaper
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goods
such as medicine, clothes, and electronics.
For instance
,
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viewers
spent
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only
6. 0 seconds watching pharmaceuticals
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advertisement
while it lasted for 16. 3 seconds.

To sum up, the
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length
of
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advertisements
and the
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length
of spent viewing
are associated
with the perceived cost of the product or
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service
being advertised
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay the table show the average length of video advertisements on the internet and average length of time viewers spend watching them

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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