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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v.1

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v. 1
It is a very popular practice in the modern society to order ready-made food from restaurants, rather than cooking at home. The main reasons for such a tendency may be cheap prices in some restaurants and people’s desire to save some time from cooking. Even though ordering food have some obvious advantages, its disadvantages should not be underestimated. On the one hand, ordering prepared food may be the best choice for a busy person, who does not have time for cooking and cleaning. Cooking food at home requires a considerable amount of time, moreover the cleaning process may take even more time and resources than cooking itself. For example, cooking a simple dish such as chicken with rice and home requires significant amounts of water and electricity for electrical appliances such as the oven and dishwasher. Hence, having an opportunity to order cooking from a restaurant will save a lot of time, electricity and water. On the other hand, delegating the process of cooking to some restaurant have a dramatic disadvantage of not having the information about the ingredients used in the meals. With high demand, grow the volumes of required products, which sometimes can affect the quality of purchased produce. For example, it is a very common practice in some restaurants to make salads from products that are about to go bad and mask the rotten scent by adding some chemicals and spices. Hence, some restaurants may use poor quality products or chemicals for boosting taste and preservatives, which may have a negative effect on the customer’s health in the long run. In conclusion, ordering food from restaurants may be a tempting choice for people who have no time for cooking at home, but this approach has a critical disadvantage of being not informed about the ingredients used in the meal, which can have destructive consequences.
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very
popular practice in the modern society to order ready-made
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food
from
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restaurants
,
rather
than cooking at home. The main reasons for such a tendency may be
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cheap
prices in
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some
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restaurants
and
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people
’s desire to save
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some
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time
from cooking.
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ordering
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food
have
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some
obvious advantages, its disadvantages should not
be underestimated
.

On the one hand, ordering prepared
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food
may be the best choice for a busy person, who does not have
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time
for cooking and cleaning. Cooking
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food
at home requires a considerable amount of
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time
,
moreover
the cleaning process may take even more
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time
and resources than cooking itself.
For example
, cooking a simple dish such as chicken with rice and home requires significant amounts of water and electricity for electrical appliances such as the oven and dishwasher.
Hence
, having an opportunity to order cooking from a
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restaurant
will save
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a lot of
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time
, electricity and water.

On the other hand
, delegating the process of cooking to
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some
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restaurant
have a dramatic disadvantage of not having the information about the ingredients
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used
in the meals. With high demand, grow the volumes of required products, which
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sometimes
can affect the quality of
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purchased
produce.
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very
common practice in
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some
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restaurants
to
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make
salads from products that are about to go
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bad
and mask the rotten scent by adding
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some
chemicals and spices.
Hence
,
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some
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restaurants
may
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use
poor quality products or chemicals for boosting taste and preservatives, which may have a
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negative
effect on the customer’s health in the long run.

In conclusion
, ordering
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food
from
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restaurants
may be a tempting choice for
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people
who have no
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time
for cooking at home,
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but
this approach has a critical disadvantage of being not informed about the ingredients
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used
in the meal, which can have destructive consequences.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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