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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Colour perception and associated mood swings are subjective to an individual. It is often observed that colour can affect the emotions of a person, hence it is important to be careful while designing an office space. I believe that it is true to an extent, as the pleasant colours can brighten up a person's mood and even enhance the concentration while working. Some shades are believed to secrete happy hormones in human, being happy and calm. The splash of bright colours in a summer dress is an example of expressing happiness through colours. In addition to that, it is obvious to see white interiors in most workspaces, considering the fact it represents purity and peace. Moreover, it provides a peaceful atmosphere and creates a positive vibe to work on. For example, research on the effects of colour on people's life claim that staring on darker shades for a long period can result in anxiety and stress, therefore, great attention should be given while selecting artworks and shades for interior designing. Furthermore, some shades can improve the concentration levels of employees and make them more focused while working. It is proved that glaring at a green wall for a while, ensure a person to stay focused, avoiding distractions. For instance, psychiatrists hypnotize their patients using specific colours to make them concentrate. Apparently, certain shades of yellow can also influence the creative thinking abilities and is often used in buildings where artists work, such as in an ad-company. To conclude, the human mind is certainly influenced by many factors and one among them is various shades of colours, which can either have a positive or negative impact depending on the person and the selected shades.
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Colour
perception and associated mood swings are subjective to an individual. It is
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often
observed that
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colour
can affect the emotions of a person,
hence
it is
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important
to be careful while designing an office space. I believe that it is true to an extent, as the pleasant
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colours
can brighten up a person's mood and even enhance the concentration while working.

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Some
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shades
are believed
to secrete happy hormones in human, being happy and calm. The splash of bright
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colours
in a summer dress is an example of expressing happiness through
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colours
.
In addition
to that, it is obvious to
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see
white interiors in most workspaces, considering the fact it represents purity and peace.
Moreover
, it provides a peaceful atmosphere and creates a
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positive
vibe to work on.
For example
, research on the effects of
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colour
on
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people
's life claim that staring on darker
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shades
for a long period can result in anxiety and
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stress
,
therefore
, great attention should be
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given
while selecting artworks and
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shades
for interior designing.

Furthermore
,
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some
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shades
can
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improve
the concentration levels of employees and
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make
them more focused while working. It
is proved
that glaring at a green wall for a while, ensure a person to stay focused, avoiding distractions.
For instance
, psychiatrists hypnotize their patients using specific
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colours
to
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make
them concentrate.
Apparently
, certain
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shades
of yellow can
also
influence the creative thinking abilities and is
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often
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used
in buildings where artists work, such as in an ad-
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company
.

To conclude
, the human mind is
certainly
influenced by
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many
factors and one among them is various
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shades
of
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colours
, which can either have a
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positive
or
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negative
impact depending on the person and the selected
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shades
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
The joy of knowing a foreign language is inexpressible. I find it really difficult to express such joy in my mother tongue.
Munia Khan

IELTS essay The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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