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The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant. v.1

The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000.
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knowledge
. Other
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people
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knowledge
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freely
,
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but
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some
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people
or online site share this
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knowledge
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only
for their paid member. In my opinion providing news
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freely
is more
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important
and in the following paragraphs I will discuss the both views.

On the one hand, it is the modern age and with the
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help
of globalization, we are
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very
close to each other,
also
we can communicate with over the world within a short time.
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Now
all over the earth researcher, businessman and teacher work together with the
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help
of sharing information. By this consequence businessman can know about business, scientist can know about update information about a research
also
in academic sector students and teacher can read
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different
latest online book and articles.

On the other hand
,
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some
prestigious journal provides scientific inquiry,
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knowledge
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only
for their paid member without that
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famous
book of academic writer and businessman advise
being sold
on the online site.
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people
can not
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all
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knowledge
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freely
that's why most of the researcher, businessman, teacher and students fall in problem to
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get
advice. If they can
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get
the report and book
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freely
they will be able to do better things for the society.

In a nutshell, although in the nature, there are numerous
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section
that provides instruction,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in my opinion, to develop the earth economy, education and analysis, we
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have to
ensure that all the location provides free instruction
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so
that
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people
can
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get
it
easily
and enhance their philosophy.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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