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The table below gives information about the sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The table below gives information about the sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
In these days and ages, since the Coronavirus epidemic is spreading all over the world, social distancing measures are being used to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits, but there will also be some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is clear that social distancing would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would prevent the spread of the disease. In particular, the goal of social distancing is to reduce the contact between infected people and uninfected people in order to minimize the transmission, infection and eventually death. Another benefit is that it would help protect the environment. Because people have to stay at home and do not go outside, there are not any transportation. This will make the environment fresher and greener. On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First and foremost, social distancing cripple the economy. Specifically, the restaurants, companies and many stores have to be closed down because of the influence of the disease, which would make the economy undeveloped. Secondly, the unemployment rate is increasing rapidly. This means that residents do not have enough money to live through the disease so that the poverty would be a rise. In conclusion, social distancing has both advantages and disadvantages
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distancing measures are being
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to dealing with it. This solution would create certain benefits,
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some
drawbacks.

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clear
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social
distancing would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would
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prevent
the spread of the disease.
In particular
, the goal of
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social
distancing is to
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reduce
the contact between infected
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people
and uninfected
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people
in order to minimize the transmission, infection and
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death. Another benefit is that it would
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help
protect the environment.
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Because
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people
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have to
stay at home and do not go outside, there are not any transportation. This will
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make
the environment fresher and greener.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
obvious disadvantages that would arise.
First
and foremost,
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social
distancing cripple the economy.
Specifically
, the restaurants,
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companies
and
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many
stores
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have to
be closed
down
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because
of the influence of the disease, which would
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make
the economy undeveloped.
Secondly
, the unemployment rate is increasing
rapidly
. This means that residents do not have
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enough
money to
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live
through the disease
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so
that the poverty would be a rise.

In conclusion
,
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social
distancing has both advantages and disadvantages
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IELTS essay The table below gives information about the sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
211 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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