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Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. v.1

Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. v. 1
Nowhere in our history has a pandemic been more serious than the outbreak of Covid-19. Consequently, social-distancing is on top of the list to protect human beings from being affected. While some people still assume this lockdown learning refrains them from following their routines, I have taken this time to enhance my skillets, namely time-management and cooking skills. My top priority in the lockdown period was always my study. However, with the abundance of time must come the procrastination and the idleness. In an attempt to develop time-management skills, I would tight myself on a daily schedule. Before the start of the day, I made a list on which I marked some optional leisure pursuits and homework tasks that needed immediate attention. Academic tasks were attached to strict deadlines and they were definitely prioritized. My daily schedule comprised of that list and some reminders. For instance, one of them was ‘never past bedtime at eleven o'clock’ in order not to indulge myself in the comfort of the break. Following a schedule required strong determinations and motivations. When I could maintain good time-management skills, I would spare enough đây to pursue my hobbies and spontaneously strike a balance between my study and my recreational activities. Apart from improving my academic performance, generating new life skills was my second priority. I have started to expand my culinary repertoire since the very first days of the lockdown period. Basically, I was familiar with the kitchen as I always had the predilection for preparing home meals. Furthermore, it goes without saying that cooking is a crucial life skill that every mother urges the daughter to master before getting married. Prior to preparing the ingredients, I usually checked for the best recipe to prevent social-contacts as much as possible. To my way of thinking, the most difficult point in cooking was that the cook had to accurately measure the ingredients and the spice to delicately perform the flavours of the food. Recently, I sought out plenty of cooking tips; however, the best tip of the time was always the satisfied feelings when seeing your family enjoying your dishes. Cooking skills and time-management skills were some of many quintessential skills I need to practice and this period provided me with nothing but time for my self-improvement. As everything must be viewed from different perspectives, supposing people took time to fully develop their strengths, the lockdown would be much expeditious and meaningful.
Nowhere in our history has a pandemic been more serious than the outbreak of Covid-19.
Consequently
, social-distancing is on top of the list to protect human beings from being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
. While
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
still
assume this lockdown learning refrains them from following their routines, I have taken this
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time
to enhance my skillets,
namely
time-management and cooking
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skills
.

My top priority in the lockdown period was always my study.
However
, with the abundance of
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time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
the procrastination and the idleness. In an attempt to develop time-management
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skills
, I would tight myself on a daily schedule.
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Before
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
of the day, I made a list on which I marked
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some
optional leisure pursuits and homework tasks that needed immediate attention. Academic tasks
were attached
to strict
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deadlines and
they were definitely prioritized. My daily schedule comprised of that list and
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some
reminders.
For instance
, one of them was ‘never past bedtime at eleven o'clock’ in order not to indulge myself in the comfort of the break. Following a schedule required strong determinations and motivations. When I could maintain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time-management
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skills
, I would spare
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enough
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đây
to pursue my hobbies and
spontaneously
strike a balance between my study and my recreational activities.

Apart from improving my academic performance, generating new life
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skills
was my second priority. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to expand my culinary repertoire since the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
first
days of the lockdown period.
Basically
, I was familiar with the kitchen as I always had the predilection for preparing home meals.
Furthermore
, it goes without saying that cooking is a crucial life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
that every mother urges the daughter to master
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
getting married. Prior to preparing the ingredients, I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
for the best recipe to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
social-contacts as much as possible. To my way of thinking, the most difficult point in cooking was that the cook had to
accurately
measure the ingredients and the spice to
delicately
perform the
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flavours
of the food. Recently, I sought out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of cooking tips;
however
, the best tip of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
was always the satisfied feelings when seeing your family enjoying your dishes.

Cooking
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skills
and time-management
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skills
were
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some
of
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many
quintessential
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skills
I need to practice and this period provided me with nothing
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but
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time
for my self-improvement. As everything
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must
be viewed
from
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different
perspectives, supposing
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people
took
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time
to
fully
develop their strengths, the lockdown would be much expeditious and meaningful.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
405 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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