It is often argued that school children are not obtaining feedbacks from their mother and father about their educational process at a learning institution, while other offsprings receive a lot of stress which has a detrimental impact on them. In my opinion, parental guidance and supervision will lead to better grades and nice future of a child,
It is widely believed that marks play an essential role in the educational process. Because of that some parents strictly control the academic results of each subject of their son or daughter. Graduation with a high GPA will give a chance for college students to receive a scholarship which will cut parents' expense. A recent study shows that 90 percent of applicants with average mark B+ are able to receive funding from a postsecondary institution for tuition fee purposes.
Some parents state that monitoring the study of the wards can reduce stress in the future. According to their views, such supervision can help them, when they will become an adult. If personally prepared for this control from an early age, they will not care about this pressure. A research found that every 6 out 10 students become successful in their careers and the reason for this is receiving pressure from their parents.
In conclusion, some children receive pressure from their father and mother and the reason for this is good marks and a better future. In my opinion, the main task of each mom and dad is to prepare their kids for adulthood and their role in education is vital because successful people usually have a great educational background.
It is
often
argued that school children are not obtaining feedbacks from their mother and father about their educational process at a learning institution, while other
offsprings
receive
a lot of
stress
which has a detrimental impact on them. In my opinion, parental guidance and supervision will lead to better grades and nice future of a child,
It is
widely
believed that marks play an essential role in the educational process.
Because
of that
some
parents
strictly
control the academic results of each subject of their son or daughter. Graduation with a high GPA will give a chance for college students to
receive
a scholarship which will
cut
parents' expense. A recent study
shows
that 90 percent of applicants with average mark B+ are able to
receive
funding from a
postsecondary
institution for tuition fee purposes.
Some
parents state that monitoring the study of the wards can
reduce
stress
in the future. According to their views, such supervision can
help
them, when they will become an adult. If
personally
prepared for this control from an early age, they will not care about this pressure.
A research
found that every 6 out 10 students become successful in their careers and
the reason for this is
receiving pressure from their parents.
In conclusion
,
some
children
receive
pressure from their father and mother and
the reason for this is
good
marks and a better future. In my opinion, the main task of each mom and dad is to prepare their kids for adulthood and their role in education is vital
because
successful
people
usually
have a great educational background.
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