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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.7

The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. v. 7
In the contemporary epoch, it is moot point that individuals need to have some skills and abilities to achieve the goals which are not taught in any academic courses or training providing units. I strongly agree with this notion the concept of educational systems cannot train skilled graduates. A significant chunk of communities welcomes this conception that collegiate learning is not relevant for today's workforce. The most conspicuous one is, they are theatrical and based by some formula to solve hard equivalents. In other words, finding methods for mathematic questions train specific people for academic institutes. This concept not only is not operational in life, but is forgettable in the future. Although, most competent engineers spent more time in academic courses to gain profession skills, there some evidence show most of their fellow mates need to throw more accomplishments to absorb on the labour pool. Looking from another perspective, multifarious reasons can discuses to justify this state some skills do not teach in universities. There is also a significant group of individuals who are fortunate in their fields, however, they do not have special improvement in university. Take for instance some jobs like chefs or Automechanika. Furthermore, in some situations, people can get a higher education, skills and experiences whenever they need to that for obtain a new position being applied for. It can be illustrated by an example, after diploma students can absorb by employers due to their different abilities, while they think need to get soft skills and higher experience to earn more benefit, they can register in related institutes. In conclusion, as we have seen, there is no easy answer to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that current academic education methods not only are not suitable for attenders, but also in some cases cause them disappointed in the future.
In the contemporary epoch, it is moot point that individuals
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skills
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courses or training providing units. I
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agree
with this notion the concept of educational systems cannot train skilled graduates.

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today
's workforce. The most conspicuous one is, they are theatrical and based by
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some
formula to solve
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hard
equivalents.
In other words
, finding methods for mathematic questions train specific
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people
for
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academic
institutes. This concept not
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only
is not operational in life,
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but
is forgettable in the future. Although, most competent engineers spent more time in
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academic
courses to gain profession
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skills
, there
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some
evidence
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show
most of their fellow mates
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need
to throw more accomplishments to absorb on the
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labour
pool.

Looking from another perspective, multifarious reasons can discuses to justify this state
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some
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skills
do not teach in universities. There is
also
a significant group of individuals who are fortunate in their fields,
however
, they do not have special improvement in university. Take
for instance
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some
jobs like chefs or
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Automechanika
.
Furthermore
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situations,
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people
can
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get
a higher education,
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skills
and experiences whenever they
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need
to that for obtain a new position
being applied
for. It can
be illustrated
by an example, after diploma students can absorb by employers due to their
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different
abilities, while they
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think
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need
to
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get
soft
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skills
and higher experience to earn more benefit, they can register in related institutes.

In conclusion
, as we have
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seen
, there is no easy answer to this question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that
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current
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academic
education methods not
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only
are not suitable for attenders,
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but
also
in
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some
cases cause them disappointed in the future.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS essay The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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