It is argued by many that the use of animals for the purpose of medical inquiry for the betterment of human being is right while others believe it is unacceptable. In my opinion, while I believe the usage of animals for medical investigation is a good idea because it saves humans from being treated in a barbaric manner for medical purposes, I also agree that it is detrimental to the existence of the subject animals.
Humans have been used in the past for several medical inquiry projects that are seen to be inhumane as they caused permanent damage to their lives. Because of this, it is better to explore animals for medical researches. Furthermore, the adoption of animals for exploration will help scientist to accurately develop vaccines and medicines without causing great harm to the subject animals unlike humans. For instance, ananalysis for the cure of syphilis was conducted on 400 men and women, 200 were infected with the virus without their consent so as to monitor the progression of the disease and they were left untreated. The prolonged presence of the disease led to permanent loss of sight and deafness in the 200 persons. As a result of this probe, medical personnels began testing drugs and vaccines on animals in the bid to curb the barbaric act on human lives.
However, using some certain animals for medical exploration has been found to be detrimental to their existence as it could lead to the extinction of such species. For example, the US bio-research program showed that specific animals whose species are rare and have been used for medical research that causes gene mutations are now unable to procreate. This development would lead to extinction once the remaining breed dies. In my opinion, it is therefore advisable that animal species that are abundant should be used for research.
In conclusion, although the need of animals for medical investigation is harmful to their being, I am of the opinion that animals of bountiful species should be used for research purposes
It
is argued
by
many
that the
use
of
animals
for the purpose of
medical
inquiry for the betterment of
human
being is right while others believe it is unacceptable. In my opinion, while I believe the usage of
animals
for
medical
investigation is a
good
idea
because
it saves
humans
from
being treated
in a barbaric manner
for
medical
purposes, I
also
agree
that it is detrimental to the existence of the subject animals.
Humans have been
used
in the past for several
medical
inquiry projects that are
seen
to be inhumane as they caused permanent damage to their
lives
.
Because of this
, it is better to explore
animals
for
medical
researches.
Furthermore
, the adoption of
animals
for exploration will
help
scientist to
accurately
develop vaccines and medicines without causing great harm to the subject
animals
unlike
humans
.
For instance
,
ananalysis
for the cure of syphilis
was conducted
on 400
men
and women, 200
were infected
with the virus without their consent
so as to
monitor the progression of the
disease and
they were
left
untreated. The prolonged presence of the disease led to permanent loss of sight and deafness in the 200 persons.
As a result
of this probe,
medical
personnels
began testing drugs and vaccines on
animals
in the bid to curb the barbaric act on
human
lives
.
However
, using
some
certain
animals
for
medical
exploration has
been found
to be detrimental to their existence as it could lead to the extinction of such species.
For example
, the US bio-research program
showed
that specific
animals
whose species are rare and have been
used
for
medical
research that causes gene mutations are
now
unable to procreate. This development would lead to extinction once the remaining breed
dies
. In my opinion, it is
therefore
advisable that
animal
species that are abundant should be
used
for research.
In conclusion
, although the need of
animals
for
medical
investigation is harmful to their being, I am of the opinion that
animals
of bountiful species should be
used
for research purposes
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