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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learnt at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. v. 4
Learning a new skill can enhance a person's knowledge. It is believed that for being a successful person, one need to have a number of qualities and skills that are not being taught in schools as well as universities. I partially agree with this statement and reasons behind by inclination are articulated in the subsequent paragraphs. To embark with, schools and universities play a vital role in a person's life along with that it is the foundation of better future. It is been proven by many successful personality that skills for being successful can not be learnt from academic only however, number of skills can be learned from other people too. Qualities such as problem solving, ability to grasp anything, doing work efficiently rather than working hard and many more. For instance, a successful businessman called Bill Gates is co-founder of Microsoft company. Although, he is successful person but it can not be denied that he is a college dropout. Therefore, it can be said that one should develop his own skills and qualities rather than focusing on academic scores. Moreover, academic Institutes help students to learn about the knowledge of books which too can be fruitful in future life. However, a person had been to school in his life consequently school helps one to learn the ability of reading, writing, speaking and listening. These are the basic skills that one must have. Without such proficiency one can not communicate, earn money as well as be successful. University also plays a major role in everyone's life consequently to follow the path to their career. To conclude, not only academic knowledge but skill to conquer anything is also essential to be successful in life.
Learning a new
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skill
can enhance a person's knowledge. It
is believed
that for being a
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successful
person, one need to have a number of qualities and
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skills
that are not
being taught
in
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schools
as well
as universities. I
partially
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agree
with this statement and reasons behind by inclination
are articulated
in the subsequent paragraphs.

To embark with,
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schools
and universities play a vital role in a person's
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life
along with that it is the foundation of better future. It
is been
proven by
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many
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successful
personality that
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skills
for being
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successful
can not be
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learnt
from
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academic
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only
however
, number of
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skills
can
be learned
from other
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people
too. Qualities such as problem solving, ability to grasp anything, doing work
efficiently
rather
than working
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hard
and
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many
more.
For instance
, a
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successful
businessman called Bill Gates is co-founder of Microsoft
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company
. Although, he is
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successful
person
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but
it can not
be denied
that he is a college dropout.
Therefore
, it can
be said
that one should develop his
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own
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skills
and qualities
rather
than focusing on
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academic
scores.
Moreover
,
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academic
Institutes
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help
students to learn about the knowledge of books which too can be fruitful in future life.

However
, a person had been to
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school
in his
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life
consequently
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school
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
one to learn the ability of reading, writing, speaking and listening. These are the basic
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skills
that one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have. Without such proficiency one can not communicate, earn money
as well
as be
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successful
. University
also
plays a major role in everyone's
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life
consequently
to follow the path to their career.

To conclude
, not
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only
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academic
knowledge
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but
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skill
to conquer anything is
also
essential to be
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successful
in
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life
.
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IELTS essay The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learnt at a university or other academic institutions.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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